Monster Energy: Ripper

[Competitive]

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264673843.png

So, finished that can I was making. ^_^, this is what it should of looked like. I have wips if you'd like me to upload them.


http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_UXOS5H6JzkI/Sir5FLk1tqI/AAAAAAAAAEs/xml7BPiaDJ4/s400/monster.m-80.can.jpg

This is my first go at pixel art other than basic Habbo Alterations, criticise please, I welcome all criticism. Please tell me any errors or improvements I could make so I can improve next time.

Also, rate out of 10 please! Thanks! :3

[thorn]

It isn't really Habbo-y is it??


Also i don't believe it is yours tbh.. as it says- iBanter

And you're not iBanter :D

[Dinosaurawrr]

its nice...
but the top is a bit weird!
just a hole?:P
also could u post them wips pls ;)

[Competitive]

It isn't really Habbo-y is it??


Also i don't believe it is yours tbh.. as it says- iBanter

And you're not iBanter :D

I am iBanter on CHF and on Habbo, this is not my main forum, therefore I haven't taken the time to change my name.


its nice...
but the top is a bit weird!
just a hole?:P
also could u post them wips pls ;)

I didn't take WIPs very often, never-the-less, here they are.


http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264776485.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264789075.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264750466.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264776410.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264778056.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264722293.png

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264783749.png

There the only ones I have, sorry!

[Dinosaurawrr]

:) okay

i think there good
but you could improve a bit more!
id start off with the top maybe you could have the pull thingy u get on cans maybe? :) x
+rep

[Sly]

the hole in the lid is too round but i can apreciate it must be hard to design that part from the angle you chose as in your ref pic you can't even see the ring pull

[Smits]

It's alright but i deffinately agree with the top. It's just a hole ratehr than a lid cap thing.

Should of maybe not done the top and stuck the the picture style.

[Fivas]

That's pretty cool. a lot of work gone into it ^_^

[Dottz]

Try adding more shading to the can.