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Alex3213
02-02-2010, 07:59 AM
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I remember when I was in Primary School, that was the first time I did stimulus writing. Sometimes I had to write about an object, sometimes about a video clip or sometimes just a sentence opening. So I thought, who can find a good line for an object?

You simply need to write one sentence about this object for the introduction to a story!
Wait for it...
Wait for it..
It's an Electronic Guitar!

Well that was unexpected, wasn't it? Clauses are advised, but sometimes a smaller sentence can give the most impact on a story! Let's see if your English lessons have paid off, get writing!


1st Prize: 20 rep
2nd Prize: 15 rep

Feebica
08-02-2010, 11:56 AM
As I teared open the glossy christmas wrapping paper, I felt my heart rate increasing, I saw my electric guitar, in mint condition, and I SCREAMED thankyouu so much!!

Circadia
08-02-2010, 04:16 PM
i looked, there was , right in front of me , a , big , sexy , pink , ELECTRIC GUITAR!!!

samantha421
09-02-2010, 08:09 AM
Excitment, fustration and anxiety overwhelmed me when I couldn't open the box to my new, unique, fragile, electric guitar.

Jessie
09-02-2010, 11:07 AM
Her long wooden neck, her delicate polished curves, her strong metal strings - she was all mine, my fantastic electric guitar.

Pigperson
09-02-2010, 10:40 PM
BANG! BANG! BANG! His electric guitar was shot front, back and centre.

Will :eusa_danc

-Refreshers.
09-02-2010, 11:05 PM
IT WAS LOUD, ELECTRIFYING, AMPLIFIED! The baby of my life.

karter
10-02-2010, 12:55 PM
I saw her in my Brother's Hand , as elegant as a pretty English woman
She was Dancing to and fro on the wild wavy tunes and i was left dazzled by its beauty

DoctorET
10-02-2010, 04:06 PM
i gave the present to my brother, he smiled at the huge size of it then slowly pulled at the wrapping paper, but hes a boy so he then ripped the wrapping paper clean off and said: " oh thanks Emma er wow? I don't know what to say" and then walked off to play on his new nintendo wii.

ACuteRainbow
11-02-2010, 08:18 PM
It sat, dusty in a corner, it's strings tinted with a hint of rust.

ILickSheep..
11-02-2010, 09:54 PM
WOW a guitar... Thanks mum




xD :eusa_danc

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