My poem

[Titch]

our love was like the burning star,
Lifes a ***** for keeping us apart so far,
the grass is green, with the wind so strong,
i really do miss you, where did we go wrong?

Your the love that controls my feet
You’re the reason why my heart skips a beat
you lead me in a strange direction,
Baby I miss your affection.

ino this is all just words, and you wont understand,
but i miss one thing, that’s the firm grip of your hand
And your big arms Grasping me, Iv never felt so secure
This isn’t a dream iv never been so sure.

Im so choked up without you here
Im scared of losing you and full of fear
It feels as if im being stung by a swarm of bees
The thought of you being with me makes me freeze
I think of you and it makes me warm inside
But when ever I talk to you my feelings hide
Im rapidly running out of ideas
And stocking up, getting ready for tears
I need to win your love back
Because my life is good, you’re the only thing I lack.

Just remember sweetie, im here for you
Becos aslong as your happy im happy too
I have to be honest Iv got it bad
But if I have you ill never be sad
I hope this poem spells it out
And you realise that it is actually you its about
Cos baby this is how I feel
And now you’ve read this I can start to heal.
Theres not much more to say now apart from three little words that mean so much
Darling sweetheart, I love you
..SO much.

[ItsDave]

That's... pretty good actually. +rep

[Titch]

thanks :)

[Dinosaurawrr]

really good
+rep too :)

[Arch]

pretty nifty

[Catzsy]

That is very good - we have a talent amongst us!

[Titch]

really good
+rep too :)

Thanks :)


pretty nifty

Thanks :)


That is very good - we have a talent amongst us!

Thanks :P, i didnt actually mean to write it, i was upset and was doodling and ended up writing it.

[Catzsy]

Thanks :)



Thanks :)



Thanks :P, i didnt actually mean to write it, i was upset and was doodling and ended up writing it.

Well the best poems come from the 'heart'. You should do more. xx

[Grig]

That was a wonderful poem and Rosie is right, you do indeed have talent I shall without any hesitation give you +rep as that was sweet :)