Selena V2

[dbgtz]

Could have put in the same thread but I didn't want to :)

http://i45.tinypic.com/nflavc.png
I think it's much better then the one before (the one on the right) and the left image is obviously a reference.

Closed by Orangeesh (Forum Moderator): Thread closed due to being bumped.

[dbgtz]

slight improvment:
http://i45.tinypic.com/2zywf9j.png

[Verrou]

Looks like a hunchback. Don't like it at all soz.

[::Art::]

I love Selena. Sorry but i dont like this.

[RatedRShadow]

Not bad, but i believe there is/are still a lot to improve on. All the best, mate! :)

[Suspective]

Its okay

Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please always try to post constructively.

[dbgtz]

You're all very helpful :l

Anyway I think this removes the hunchback look:
http://i47.tinypic.com/ddj1mw.png

[Describe]

Her more visible shoulder is too far away from her head, hence giving her the hunchback look and her mouth is hardly visible.

[marine]

It's nice, I think the mouth could be slightly improved though.. :P
Good work though!

[Smits]

Wheresw the mouth? You can hardly make it out.

The shoulders are too big as well. Other than that its not too shabby. Nice work with the dress, keep it up +rep.

[Steals]

This is not good at all. she has a random brown dot on her chest, her lips are just crappy. The dress makes her look fat. The leggings look like she has a skin disease. The shoes makes her feet look huge. The hair looks nothing like the picture. This is just a horrible reproduction of the referred picture.

[dbgtz]

Urrm, you bumped to prove a point that you fail in? That brown dot is a mole that she has and yes the lips do not stand out. Also that is the standard habbo dress size so that's clearly made up. Also a skin disease? PMSL THOSE ARE THE ACTUAL THINGS SHE WEARS, so if you really think that then the real thing must look like a weird skin disease to you. And no they do not look huge? If anything the shoes too small tbh.