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omgALICE
21-04-2010, 01:40 PM
http://s741.photobucket.com/albums/xx57/piefacedude/?action=view&current=gigs.png
or if it doesnt show-
http://s741.photobucket.com/albums/xx57/piefacedude/?action=view&current=gigs.png

like it? rate/slate. (yn)
its my second alt ever. :D :eusa_danc

Alexx..
21-04-2010, 01:44 PM
i'm sorry but that is awful, the chin needs MAJOR improvements.

omgALICE
21-04-2010, 03:25 PM
i'm sorry but that is awful, the chin needs MAJOR improvements.

ive improved now.

Smits
21-04-2010, 04:01 PM
Whats that groth on his face?

Monkey arms?

Wonky thong?

keep trying.

BeccaMole
21-04-2010, 07:23 PM
Errm, its not very good, the huge growth thing on the side of his head needs improving, its not got shading or black lines around the edge to define the face, the girls are wonky and i think it needs huge improvements.

Matthew
22-04-2010, 08:52 PM
*_*

the thing coming out of his face...
the arms...
the shoulders...

its not very good at all o.O

Samantha
25-04-2010, 03:18 PM
I would do alterations myself but my USB mouse decided to break on me. Anyway, it's your second EVER alt, and you don't get cut slack. Some people need to remember your only experimenting and learning yourself and want to improve, not get called awful etc.

Anyway, the shading needs to be improved, a more rounded edge would improve the chin for sure, you can tell that he is only 2d which needs some work on because of the angle he is faced at. However, for your second alt it's fine, you can learn and improve each time you complete an alt, it's just practicing more and more until you are happy with your design.

:)

dbgtz
25-04-2010, 03:29 PM
But you fail to realise that many people do better than this on their 1st.
1 - the text and c+ped prostitutes just make it look really bad, more so then it already is.
2 - the underwear isn't isometric.
3 - the chin has no shading or black outline
4 - the structure of the body is really bad, just keep it a normal habbo size
5 - the whole thing lacks shading
6 - don't put it on a black background.

wiktoria
25-04-2010, 05:27 PM
Sorry but what is the thing on his chin? The writing looks really bad, I think you should try it again but with different writing and I agree with above don't use black background :)

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