My first attempt :S

[Jessicrawrr]

So yeah, Iv'e never done this before so I hope you like it xD
Comment please :P

[Jorc]

Needs more shading on the dress, nice first attempt though. The hair looks squared, also needs shading.

[Jessicrawrr]

Needs more shading on the dress, nice first attempt though. The hair looks squared, also needs shading.

Thanks for the comment :)
On my next one I'll shade more and stuff :)

[-Nick]

nice but this is on the scale 4/10

[Nicola]

Not bad for a first attempt at all :)

The only thing is everything seems a little rough around the edges, like someone said above the hair probably needs smoothing a bit.

Other than that it's good!

[myke]

I like it, it has potential. Take more note on the shading though and the colours are very harsh on the eyes, apart from that, I think it looks pretty good. The hair seems to be one black block though??