Desperate Housewives Alteration

[Sezabi]

I made this a while ago, I was told by someone that I should post it on here to get proper constructive critique on how to improve, etc.
I know I've sort of lost the whole habbo shape, but I actually prefer it that way. :P

http://i42.tinypic.com/35nbfxt.png
I used photoshop for shading for the dress on the far right (paint was a bit too tricky to pull of ruffles), it's based on this picture:
http://411onsoaps.com/wp-content/uploads/Desperate-Housewives-Laundry-754101.JPG

[rnix]

3 things.
- The far left on is dead
- You are missing a basket thing
- You are missing the hunky guy. :)

Other than that i think its fantastic :)

[Volumise]

This is amazing. I love desp housewives, clever to think of making an alt of it. Good job :)

[22andy2231]

again nice work :D:D:D:D:D:D

[Blob]

That is truly amazing, good work! +rep

[Shar]

Omg this is AMAZING
+rep :O

[Describe]

I was told by someone that I should post it on here to get proper constructive critique on how to improve, etc.
Glad to see you've taken my advice Sarah!

[Nicola]

That is actually fantastic, I have nothing bad to say about it! +rep

You have a real talent here :)

[Richie]

haha thats deadly, nice work.

[dbgtz]

WIPs? Considering you only have 3 posts

[Describe]

WIPs? Considering you only have 3 posts
I can vouge for her, she's genuine.

[Con]

http://i42.tinypic.com/35nbfxt.png

Okay few things here :)
You'd probably be better off making this into a non-habbo alt really :)
1. The washing machine on the left is very basic and lacks really any shadingand the circle is not isometric, try and work on those as wellas the main feature of the alt.
2. The one second from the right looks almost, too skinny! Where her body is under her boobs she looks completely flatand I think a bit more shading is needed there,
3. Where you've tried to add cheekbones on the one on the far left, the colour is far too light and looks like a line on her face.
4. All their lips are similar and look a bit weird really, in my opinion.
5. The one that's almost ginger in the middle, her dress lacks shading etc. around the detail imo and doesn't look write, almost basic looking.

Anyway, it's a very good job in my opinion, but probably would be best off as a non-habbo alt as it's not really stuck to the habbo shapes/sizes etc.

+REP anyway, if you follow my criticism points, I'm sure it'll look much better :)!

[Sezabi]

thanks guys!
Also, I don't usually do WIPs but I have one for this which is from when I was trying to create the bubble effect at the bottom.. but failed miserably so obv I left it out of the actual alt.

http://i41.tinypic.com/1zw21y.png

[Warmness]

I really like the design outline wise, but I am not a fan of the shading on their face and body parts. Try making it more smooth and add colors to the palette.

[Smits]

Really good but i think you need to work on the faces.