Random Alts.

[Nassir]

Hey. I stumbled across this forum and I decided to show some off my random alts. Currently, I roleplay on Habbo Hotel, Star Wars. I've done quite a lot of alts but from the looks of 'em; they're pretty simple compared to yours. Anyway;

http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/1664/eziout.png http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3354/ezio2.png http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8866/nassir2.gif http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/2163/nassirvel.gif http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7105/nassir3.png

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/6858/jedivsith2.png

That's just a couple of our members on there.

Also, feel free to check us out. Search Sentinent on Habbo Hotel and come look around, you may think it sounds pretty bad but it's good fun.

All comments appreciated. xx

[dbgtz]

Right I'll start bad:
1) That green thing (bottom right) is just geneally awful, badly pixelated lines and bad shading, looks quite 2d.
2) When the light hands is used the reflection is pretty poor, needs to blend more
3) Some of the light sabers look quite jagged
4) This isn't really bad but i'd love to see the assassin in isometric view.
5) The lava (or I think it is) doesn't look very good, bad shading, doesn't look like liquid.

Good:
1) The animations are pretty sweet, very smooth imo.
2) The assassins are pretty good.
3) The little scene box, just pretty cool tbh :L

I could go on but I don't have the time :L

[Kyle]

I could point out all your errors but I'm so lazy so I'll just say that some are good, some are bad. Most need work (e.g. one balancing on vine). If you paid more attention to the finer details these could look really nice. I don't like the light coming from the hands, it shouldn't be around just the the fingers but the whole hand and likewise the whole body of its victim.

In the animated 'nassir vel, jedi master' one you could make the light sabre spin when he throws it. When he throws it now it's horizontal then it goes off screen. After it reappears it's facing an entirely different way to which it was thrown... :S!

Gr8 work though

[Plurms]

Aha, nice ^.^

[Jessicrawrr]

I think the animations are fab!
and the rest of it is amazing :D
Shading could be improved but other than that great!

[Gibs960]

The lightsabers look jagged. The shading on some of them looks rushed. But the Assassins look good and the animations are very well put together :)

[wiktoria]

Some of them are good but some are bad :P Nice animations though :)

[-Nick]

there good 10/10

[Gibs960]

The one with the lava type stuff looks weird because the lava doesn't look liquidy ( :L @ the word liquidy) and the guy with the blue lightsaber looks like a deformed rat, and the lightsabers look jagged :) But all the animations rock :D

[Nassir]

Ty. Yeah I left the glow around the hand of Yajuu (Guy on the vine) by accident and I cba to go back and edit it. The reason some of the Lightsabers are jagged is because there is another program many people use called LSMaker, which 80% of the time looks **** and I cba learning how to use it, so instead I do them in Paint.

Someone has already told me about the way the Lightsaber goes from a different angle too quick, but I really can't be ****** to change the angle; which would cause a blur due to it being a Lightsaber.

The Lava was a *****, so any tips on making it more... 'liquid' looking are appreciated, and tbh I did rush that Plant Surge.

Thanks for the comments. xx

[Narnat,]

There not that bad I have seen worse yet have seen better.