[MR] MasterChief from halo 3 and The Joker [MR]

[MasteRyder]

http://i50.tinypic.com/ftd4xv.pngI did this one a while ago, I think the helmet is kinda strange, but I don't know where the problem is x_x
I tried my best at this one, and I liked the result

http://i48.tinypic.com/fxcxsx.pngThe problem of this one is again the head... the hair to be more specific... i kinda did well for the part on the left, but for the right part i kinda missed it... someone could help me at it?

please leave comments that you think that would help me n_n


[sorry for my horrible english x_x]

[paramoreriot]

They look really amazing but something doesn't look right with first ones proportion

[Kyle]

first one looks really plastic because of the way you've shaded it. you put a light green line on pretty much every edge. It's dithered loads, too. use more solid blocks of color and less jagged lines and it could look cool. second is pretty good, coat looks greak aside from a few parts.

[myke]

The outline is cool, but the first one seems to get thinner as it goes down... the second is excellent, as Kyle said, the coat is great but the waistcoat shading on the left seems to be a bit weird.. like it goes way too far in

[Jessicrawrr]

amazing.
+rep for the amazing work dude.

[Andii]

oo thats bril :D:D:D:D you should try Gears of War characters lol :D:D:D:D:D


+rep

[dbgtz]

Shut up about gears of war it sucks ass
anyway WIPs please considering youre new.