Still Trying To Write A Book!

[Mickword]

Erm right I tried to write a book ages ago and I got side tracked and lost the works lolz. Right so I feel like writing a new one. But I dunno really what to write about. Btw I am not asking you to tell me what to right about but I am asking you to vote which one you like best.

Vampires (Not so much as it will be a copy of Twilight)
Werewolves (I know Werewolves are in Twilight but, I like writing about them, maybe something about life as it)

Any other ideas: I will give credit to you if you do help me, but you don't need to.

So any ideas or help will be great thanks :), also sorry about if this is in the wrong section.

[Nemo]

invent a new half animal half human thing that'll be totally badass

[Mickword]

Hmm, sorta like a Werewolf? But a different animal? Tbh, if that goes well I could do a whole series of them with different animals. Also would it be like what they do in there life or they go to war or something.

[Nemo]

Hmm, sorta like a Werewolf? But a different animal? Tbh, if that goes well I could do a whole series of them with different animals. Also would it be like what they do in there life or they go to war or something.
i dno you're the storywriter

[Mickword]

Yeah true lmao, erm I think I will go for something along the lines of modern life as one and just go from there. Hmm may do them as teens outcasts.

[Judas]

Hmm, sorta like a Werewolf? But a different animal? Tbh, if that goes well I could do a whole series of them with different animals. Also would it be like what they do in there life or they go to war or something.

should be their dont make that kind of mistake in the book :D

if you want me to vote between vampires and werewolves then werewolves because the fact you already had to tell people vampires wouldnt be like twilight just shows that we dont need another, anyone who read it would just compare it all the time simply because twilight is so big. i know you will just say it wouldnt be like it, but people will assume its a copy before they know anything about it :P

but i like the idea of making some kind of new animal thing. if you pulled it off it could be a great original story :)

[Mickword]

should be their dont make that kind of mistake in the book :D

if you want me to vote between vampires and werewolves then werewolves because the fact you already had to tell people vampires wouldnt be like twilight just shows that we dont need another, anyone who read it would just compare it all the time simply because twilight is so big. i know you will just say it wouldnt be like it, but people will assume its a copy before they know anything about it :P

but i like the idea of making some kind of new animal thing. if you pulled it off it could be a great original story :)

lol I know, i just cba changing it. Also I am going with wolves and I got the beginning to it already:


The snow harshly came down from the heavens and touched the floor of Ache the great council of 6 arose through the thickness of the land hunting down the prey they have came to crave and thirst for. The six dispensed into the darkness as the day came. For neither man, nor beast could see what the creatures of the land, those who had seen the truth where killed and no mercy was given to those hallowed souls. The six travelled there world and watched the night sky as it was theirs to watch. As it was man’s you protect. Over 2,000 years past as this was the age of man, but this age would soon end. For this was The Age of Wolves.

[Fez]

lThe snow harshly came down from the heavens and touched the floor of Ache, the Great Council of 6 arose through the thickness of the land, hunting down the prey they have came to crave and thirst for. The six dispensed into the darkness as the day came. For neither man, nor beast could see what the creatures of the land, those who had seen the truth were killed and no mercy was given to those hallowed souls. The six travelled their world and watched the night sky as it was theirs to watch. As it was man’s world you protect. Over 2,000 years past as this was the age of man, but this age would soon end. For this was The Age of Wolves.

I really don't like it. I'm a very harsh critic but to bombard me with fictional lingo (words/stuffs/terms you invent for your own worlds) in the first paragraph, reminds me of Final Fantasy.

I always start my intro with something that doesn't set the scene, but rather sets the mood. I would rather maybe portray the actual action, out of nowhere without explanation, to develop some intrigue.

You've got guts. Writing a book requires patience, damn lots of it, something I haven't accomplished yet. I've been doing this since I was six years old, but I'm getting there, maybe you will too. Good luck.

[Mickword]

Thanks about it, and will btw in last line instead of you it was to :P dunno why i put you lmao.