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Jahova
14-06-2010, 06:51 PM
I write poems about my life, mostly love (yeah, I know). I have many private and some public, here are a few. I've posted some for you before.


# Talk to her
# Written by Tom Spiteri
# From: http://tomspit.com


Just talk to her is what they all say,
And yet I’ve been trying for nearly all day.


Every single time it seems to go wrong,
So I crawl into my shell and then write a song.


I’m a person who lacks confidence,
An emotional mute,
Some say a loser,
I refuse to dispute.


She’s my passion, my love and she fires my flames,
And everyone I tell seems to think it’s a game.


I’m worried, I’m scared and I don’t know what to do,
So I crawl into my shell and then write a song.


It’s for you.



# Dead Tone
# Written by Tom Spiteri
# From: http://tomspit.com

No contact, more pain,
It’s driving me insane,
Like your playing some game,
Will my love ever feel the same?

Confidence is key,
I want you to be with me,
But still I cannot see,
Will this love ever be?

Tender love and care,
And now she is not there,
Speak to her I dare,
Oh this love is just not fair.



# Kenneth Robert Lamprey
# Written by Thomas Spiteri.
# http://tomspit.com/

A part of the family,
A piece of me,
A carer, a lover,
A father of three.

A simple man of working class,
Basic belongings with nothing too flash,
Beliefs that guided through long, tough times,
A real great grampy, I’m glad he is mine.

Now this poem I give to you,
My caring and loving grampy,
Or better known to those around,
As Kenneth Robert Lamprey.

Rest in peace.

Thanks for the read. I appreciate it.

Gibs960
14-06-2010, 07:11 PM
I really liked them! :) They're really passionate, and I think the rhyming makes people realise how long you've thought about the words :)

Jahova
14-06-2010, 09:15 PM
Thanks, appreciate it.

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