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JACKTARD
07-07-2010, 12:46 AM
Critisicm is more than welcome.
Please don't just say "Horrible" without an explanation or something along those lines, thanks.

http://www.iaza.com/work/100707C/Grabber_7.07.1021994.png

leer34$
07-07-2010, 02:22 AM
Thats really nice, maybe just the leather chair by the dices could be changed. It just doesn't really go with the room.
Also maybe replace the world cup trophy with a jade/green birdbath. :)

Well Done Jack. +rep

lTraditional
07-07-2010, 05:51 AM
It's horrible. Jokes!! I love it, and i agree with the above post^^.

leer34$
07-07-2010, 07:58 AM
It's horrible. Jokes!! I love it, and i agree with the above post^^.
Someone agree's with me. :O


It would look alot better, can't wait to see what it looks like if you make changes. :)

Colossus
07-07-2010, 11:05 AM
Looks really nice, I like what you've done with the big ben and the british flag! I suggest you hide the moodlight though and the leather chair doesn't really blend in.

j0rd
07-07-2010, 01:10 PM
Like some1 said above, change the leather vip chair for something else. Also try putting pines under the dragons, smokes and jade bird baths :)

Overall its nice tho!

Special
07-07-2010, 01:15 PM
i like it :) good use of colour, however, it's not a original layout - you should try something different

JACKTARD
07-07-2010, 06:33 PM
Swapped Leather Chair for a maj.

Calvin
07-07-2010, 07:19 PM
I think you should replace the metal boxes with the colours matching the smokes. Other than that it's great, nice work.

Thomas
07-07-2010, 07:26 PM
wow love it! but yeh maybe chair by dice and wold cup trophy changed? rep+

JACKTARD
07-07-2010, 07:42 PM
You can see the small changes i made in my signature :)

Colossus
07-07-2010, 08:29 PM
Well like Special said, if you made your own layout it could be more unique.

JACKTARD
07-07-2010, 08:32 PM
making new designs for grabbers is hard because of the amount of space you need. I tried a few different rooms and designs and in the end it was easiest just to use this one.

Colossus
07-07-2010, 08:44 PM
Hmm.. At least you tried. :P

=Lizzy
07-07-2010, 08:49 PM
you could move the moodlight. Other than that i love it

Colossus
07-07-2010, 10:18 PM
you could move the moodlight. Other than that i love it

Aye, that's what I said :P

Minds alike!

leer34$
08-07-2010, 12:03 AM
Yes, adjusted room in your Sig look's alot better, try getting another Jade/Green Birdbath and put it where Samovar is. :)

Memberz
08-07-2010, 04:35 AM
looks pretty nice :) + rep

JACKTARD
08-07-2010, 03:19 PM
Yes, adjusted room in your Sig look's alot better, try getting another Jade/Green Birdbath and put it where Samovar is. :)


I'll do it now :)

Mr-Trainor
08-07-2010, 04:08 PM
Looks great Jack, except for:
- the leather chair in the grabber-booth. replace it with something else.
- the no-flooring under the black laser gate, put flooring under it like the rest of the room!
- the moodlight isn't hidden, hide it :P
8/10, looks quite nice overall :D

JACKTARD
09-07-2010, 05:39 PM
Looks great Jack, except for:
- the leather chair in the grabber-booth. replace it with something else.
- the no-flooring under the black laser gate, put flooring under it like the rest of the room!
- the moodlight isn't hidden, hide it :P
8/10, looks quite nice overall :D

1) Changed
2) Idk what you mean, all the black lasers are on a marble tile
3) Done :)


THIS IS MY 2000th POST

Mr-Trainor
09-07-2010, 06:07 PM
2) Idk what you mean, all the black lasers are on a marble tile
Nvm, I thought it was the floor but it's the bottom of the leather chair LOL.

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