Ariel made from scratch - Please comment good or constructive

[rokgal]

I am aware of the sseveral errors

http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/ariel.png

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sorry that it so small xx

[itsMIKEYY]

Remember to save images as .PNG format, it will improve the viewing quality.

[lPinoy]

uh, the lines are jagged and awful, try use some sort of base - only draw from scratch if you know what your doing.


Remember to save images as .PNG format, it will improve the viewing quality

It is saved as .PNG :)

[Samantha]

No shading on the green tail.
Just lines on the bottom of the tail. The tail does usually go around the body, it looks like a carboard cutout for a tail.
I like the hair.
Just work on your shading and it will improve.

[dbgtz]

theres no shading
theres no detail (like scales)
theres too thick black lines
shes broken her arm
its ugly.

[Lew]

Theres no shading on the tail, the hair is great though
the lines are jagged.. im sure you will improve if you keep working

[Jahova]

Hank McCoy did the Disney princesses a few years back and they were brilliant. I have to compare it to them and agree with the above.

[Shadowchild]

Rollerkingdom made an alt tut using his Ariel alt, you should check it out.

[Kyle]

LMAO THIS IS WEL GD

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[rokgal]

it is on png

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theres no shading
theres no detail (like scales)
theres too thick black lines
shes broken her arm
its ugly.

Id rather people reply like kyle did then saying what mr selena gomez did :(

And i am new to this so im just not gunna bother anymore

[Accipiter]

Nah dude keep bothering, i was **** when i started but you'll grow into it.

xD

never give up -peaceout no i jk

Its very complicated for a first alt but you've still done alright for a first alt. Just people like ripping the **** out of things here.

[rokgal]

if zoomed in you will see i bothered to use pencil to ch3ecker the atail blue and green

[Accipiter]

yeah i saw thats why people thought it was jpeg xD it just needs more shading and a bit more acknowledgement of colour

[lPinoy]

it is on png

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Id rather people reply like kyle did then saying what mr selena gomez did :(

And i am new to this so im just not gunna bother anymore

How are you going to benefit from what Kyle said? Its not helpful, its not true, and its not constructive.

At least Mr Selena Gomez can tell you exactly what is wrong and where you can improve on, even if it is harsh, its the truth and it will help you far more than what Kyle said.

[Samantha]

Charlotte, you can improve in time. I'm still rubbish at alterations but I keep doing them every so often. Mr Selena Gomez is harsh but he's one of the most truthful people on HabboxForum. Taking his comments into consideration will improve you.

[rokgal]

i know its just i dont find " its ugly " very helpful as a comment

[lPinoy]

Well if you ignore the last line, then you have really great advice.

[Kyle]

*REMOVED*

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[-EpicWin]

yeah i saw thats why people thought it was jpeg xD it just needs more shading and a bit more acknowledgement of colour

That, and if you lean your monitor down a bit, the face looks funky.

[Bleeders]

it is on png

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Id rather people reply like kyle did then saying what mr selena gomez did :(

And i am new to this so im just not gunna bother anymore


Agreed, sometimes people can be way to honest.

And im pretty sure last time i checked all criticism was mean't to be constructive.


Also Rokgalisevil, when i first started doing Pixel Art i didn't have a clue in the world what to do.

Half the stuff i posted was complete rubbish, but over time i progressed and the quality of my work improved and eventually i started winning Habbo Graphic competitions and even Stray Pixels.