So Simple But im So Proud x

[rokgal]

Its Simple but im proud as I made this from scratch and it dont look too bad XoXoX

here it is! (might be small and it is a png) :


http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/yay.png

[Muct]

Ermmm... :/ 2/10?
There are a lot of dips in some of the lines, like one side of the 'grass' and the lower 'roof' and the walls seem to go shorter every side of the building! Where the wall should be placed on the grass it actually dips into it, on the side of the building.

[Gina]

i like it but a word of advice is to keep the lines to 2 bars

[dbgtz]

its not isometric or habbo styled, but it's not bad for someone of your standard, theres also some shading errors.

[Gina]

i agree

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[rokgal]

i would try the 2 bar thing but im wanting it at a diagnol angel,

and muct is this what you mean?


http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/disit.png

Cos i done that to show a layer of grass behind it

[-EpicWin]

This is what is meant by 2 pixels.
http://i28.tinypic.com/mhykvk.png
instead of having it 2 pixel, 1 pixel, 3 pixel, etc.

[Muct]

Nope, I meant this:
http://i914.photobucket.com/albums/ac349/Blissco/yay.png

Soz for the crap editing lolol but anyway... But the lines are un-even and are not, I dunno how to put this, may be wrong but; They're not, paralell?

[-EpicWin]

http://i25.tinypic.com/24o3lnr.png
Revisited.
Try doing some recolor's instead for a while. Not much to be proud of, tbh.

[dbgtz]

http://i25.tinypic.com/24o3lnr.png
Revisited.
Try doing some recolor's instead for a while. Not much to be proud of, tbh.

at least he doesnt pretend hes amazing, and it kinda is considering his skill level.
also i see errors in yours.

[-EpicWin]

First of, Ms*REMOVED*, I don't think I'm amazing. In fact, when I first joined I told every-one that I know I'm not that good.
Second, yeah, it's okay, but I wouldn't proud of it. ( I am entiteled to my opinion)
Thirdly, yes, I see one unintentional error, your right, but you act like you've never made an error either? I never said mine didn't have errors, *****.

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[Camy]

at least he doesnt pretend hes amazing, and it kinda is considering his skill level.
also i see errors in yours.

lol i agree completely with this.

on topic: its not too bad for a first, but try and keep the lines isometric. and for the windows try making an isometric grid to place them on before you do.

[Kyle]

THIS REAL GOOD SO PROUD OF U UR DOIN WEL KEEP IT UP

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[-EpicWin]

THIS REAL GOOD SO PROUD OF U UR DOIN WEL KEEP IT UP

LOL wow. Don't flatter him.

OT: Work on looking at habbo furni, and see how they make cerain shapes before trying your own.

[Bleeders]

LOL wow. Don't flatter him.

OT: Work on looking at habbo furni, and see how they make cerain shapes before trying your own.

Please don't piss on peoples parades, EpicLoose.

Anyways, besides the simple errors you're slowly progressing which is great.

With time you will learn more about the feature of Ms Paint and how to use them to your advantage.

KEEP PIXELING!

[Samantha]

LOL wow. Don't flatter him.

OT: Work on looking at habbo furni, and see how they make cerain shapes before trying your own.

Firstly, she's a girl. Secondly, I'm sure you will improve Charlotte, it is quite good to say you are just starting off. If I'm honest I wouldn't be able to make something that complex yet. I say complex as it is for someone of your standard. Keep up the work and don't quit!

[Camy]

LOL wow. Don't flatter him.

I love how you took that post seriously, you're not too bright are you?

on topic: forgot to say before, try using lighter pastel colours next time, rather than 'in your face' bright yellow and red. Just will make it look better. After you've got that down, try moving on to start shading.

[orientalframe?]

sorry but its nothing to be proud of..

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[Gina]

Well ik your my twin irl charlotte [rokgal] and basically your starting with graphis works and thats your first attempt of something like that so i think you should be proud of that first attempt

[rokgal]

im not saying im amazing im saying this one wasnt as bad as my other ones so i am proud i never said i am amazing in anyway

[Scallz]

Its Simple but im proud as I made this from scratch and it dont look too bad XoXoX

here it is! (might be small and it is a png) :


http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/yay.png


Very good/very nice.

[rokgal]

Thanks to everyone who commented nicely or constructively but the only reason im proud is most of my work before i posted this was rubbish and so is this but as i only started in july id say ive improved from this piece of work to this (btw i just cant get the right colour :L ) !!!: http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/Buildingpixelart.png

[Cheryl]

Please don't piss on peoples parades, EpicLoose.

Anyways, besides the simple errors you're slowly progressing which is great.

With time you will learn more about the feature of Ms Paint and how to use them to your advantage.

KEEP PIXELING!

Wow, a bit of irony highlighted there, EpicLoose? EpicFail on your behalf there.

OT: As someone has already said use a iso. grid for the windows.


Also for the second one, do you have any WIPs as it is much better and I believe the second one is ripped.

[,elaboratedolls]

too many dips. first thing I saw was the dip in the grass. :/ Really like your other one though :)

[Tintinnabulate]

Wow this one is much much betterand looked quite cool. Maybe add some windows, and graphics etc to the hotel building like the habbo one? These would make it look even nicer.

[.Devilish..]

I think its alrite. But you might want to work on your shading and line neatness a bit. Good try for a begginer.

[Nemo]

To the new one, perhaps try and add more smaller detaisl to it. Windows, a balcony etc.

[Jessicrawrr]

You really need to add detail to both of them, that's what it's lacking.