Karate kid poster

[.red-bleu.]

It's for habbo's hottest in the dutch newsletter. (Habbo's hottest = something about a new book, movie etc.)

http://i31.tinypic.com/8vui3l.png

[Blissa]

That's really good, well done. One thing I would say is that some of the lines look a little bit rushed (Like the strings on the hoodie).

[Kyle]

looks like they kid has lopsided moobs

[Nemo]

Didnt know jackie chan had an afro

[Qwertox]

wow thats awsome

Edited by Ambzz. (Forum Moderator): Please only give constructive criticism, thanks :)

[Smits]

Didnt know jackie chan had an afro

This.

Not bad though

[dbgtz]

The lines on it are really jagged, it's like you got half way through then stopped, they need to be more smooth like on the head, it needs to be smoother.

Also I think "The Karate Kid" should be bigger.

[.red-bleu.]

Thx for the tips, it is my first big habbo.

Changed a few things
http://i28.tinypic.com/fo0s1u.png

[dbgtz]

loads of lines still need smoothing out, also maybe more shadowing on our right (jackes left).

[Molly.22]

It's pretty good, not your best work though. Jackie chans hair seems to have random dots on it, only two of the improved version though. Also on Jadens top in the top left corner it looks a bit wrong with the black lines.

[Fetes]

That is very nice, although a few posts are correct. It needs a bit but still, great work

[.red-bleu.]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2rfqwea.png

[j0rd]

Its very nice, good shading and i love the background

[Matthew]

i love the background too, imo good shading now, but i really dont like jackie's hair O.o

[Sharon]

I really like the Karate Kid's hair, quite nice detail!

[.red-bleu.]

Thx what about this shading?:/


I'll do something about the hair later... I think :P
http://i26.tinypic.com/2i0yrk7.png

[Mr-Trainor]

It looks quite nice! I don't know if it's just me but I think you should make the corners a bit more rounded as it all seems a bit too straight, particularly around the head and the right shoulder of the person to the left.

[.red-bleu.]

ok
http://i31.tinypic.com/2jfih4.png

[Tintinnabulate]

Chinese man looks amazing. Well done.