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paramoreriot
27-07-2010, 01:29 AM
First proper furniture type inspired alteration in months, im half happy with the turnout, some parts well most the shading is terrible but overall the shape im pretty happy with.

What do you think :}

http://iaza.com/work/100727C/photocopier61502.png

The photocopier i used to make it / inspired by.

http://nihongo.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/8265955/2/istockphoto_8265955-isometric-photocopiers.jpg


So once again i know shading is terrible but overall what you think thanks :}

Cornelius
27-07-2010, 05:10 AM
really well detailed :)
love the shading, great job!

::Art::
27-07-2010, 06:49 AM
Nice job mate. very good +rep

Edited by Nicola (Forum Super Moderator): Please post constructive criticism or tell the OP what is particularly good about their alt.

dbgtz
27-07-2010, 08:47 AM
Pretty good, not really habboey but still. Also why does the right side of it have dithering? It doesn't need it anywhere for this texture. And it's like you avoided black lines for a part of it and used it for the rest... Also that panel on the slope bit will need to go with the slop, either change the angle or add another side to it which follows the slope, if you get me?

Not bad though, keep going.

Jaxt
27-07-2010, 09:04 AM
What do you mean the shading is terrible? It's great!

dbgtz
27-07-2010, 10:12 AM
What do you mean the shading is terrible? It's great!

Did I ever say it was terrible? Learn to read, I said the dithering wasn't needed.

Moh
27-07-2010, 10:38 AM
Looks very good. It's a little too big for a Habbo alteration though.


Did I ever say it was terrible? Learn to read, I said the dithering wasn't needed.
I don't think he aimed it at you. The first post said "some parts well most the shading is terrible". Learn to read.

Jaxt
27-07-2010, 11:54 AM
I don't think he aimed it at you. The first post said "some parts well most the shading is terrible". Learn to read.

Ohhh snaaaapp!!1! :eusa_danc

j0rd
27-07-2010, 12:26 PM
Thats very nice, real good shading

Dinosaurawrr
27-07-2010, 01:23 PM
That's really good.
I personally can't give you any tips to improve as I think its amazing, However you could go a bit further and animate it and have paper coming out? :D

+rep btw

Storking
27-07-2010, 01:57 PM
LmAo MrSeLaNaGoMeZ gOt ToLd

yeh wiked alt, don't know any cc to say hehe

Edited by Nicola (Forum Super Moderator): Please post constructive criticism or tell the OP what is particularly good about their alt.

Mr-Trainor
27-07-2010, 02:09 PM
The structure/shape of it is great but would be nice to see some more shading on it :):D

Floreat
27-07-2010, 06:25 PM
Love it. :D Great work!

Edited by Nixt (Assistant General Manager): When commenting on alterations please explain why you like or dislike it, thanks :).

sammy
27-07-2010, 09:24 PM
I love it! The bottom looks a bit weird, looks too black in comparison to the rest but yh apart from that it's amazing. +rep :D x

Sharon
27-07-2010, 10:12 PM
I like it, I think it is quite habbo-y but yeah, the shading is fine :)

Dean
30-07-2010, 02:53 AM
That's great! Excellent shading. :)

Jessicrawrr
30-07-2010, 09:45 AM
The detail in it's amazing, +rep!

Tintinnabulate
05-08-2010, 08:04 AM
Haha sorry but for a second I thiought its those big bins. After seeing what you used to make it, it really is good. Well done :) And the shading is amazing!

Nemo
05-08-2010, 01:01 PM
wow thats amazing, not much else i can in terms of CC. Excpe tlike dino says if you animate it, but then that's rather hard. Love it either way

-iConnor,
11-08-2010, 10:42 PM
Thats Amazing Defo 10/10 Great Detail And it Looks just Like the Real Thing!
Weldone

Samantha.
11-08-2010, 10:46 PM
Looks fantastic, looks like a lot of effort has gone into it as the detail is fantastic.

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