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,elaboratedolls
02-08-2010, 01:37 PM
Was bored. Not very good but oh well xD
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Rate /10 ;] advice accepted x just no hate comments:D
click on it for a better view;] personally i think it looks better smallified:P

Jessicrawrr
02-08-2010, 01:58 PM
It's all lopsided and rushed,
you should be careful when putting the lines in it because they all stick out everywhere & it doesn't sound like much of a cake :P

4/10 :)

,elaboratedolls
02-08-2010, 02:03 PM
it was originally supposed to be pizza hut, but then it looked like a cake to me xD Maybe the cook fails at cakes 8-D

Jessicrawrr
02-08-2010, 02:06 PM
You should edit it and sort out all the uneveness ;P

Alex3213
02-08-2010, 02:14 PM
Yeah I argee, it looks a bit rushed I'm afraid and although it has potential it is rather uneven and quite frankly, I don't see a cake, sorry. :(

I think, however, if you try to shape it a bit more and take a bit more time, it could end up as a good piece of work!

,elaboratedolls
02-08-2010, 02:49 PM
might make a different cake whilst Mitsudomoe is loading. ;]

Samantha
04-08-2010, 07:42 AM
It looks like a house that is poorly shaded, isn't equal and has a random jagged line around it that is meant to be a plate.
Also, you don't really get red cakes unless you severly soak them in food coloring, but I can see the chocolate on the top which isn't bad, however, cakes aren't really pointy imo, a house would be more realistic than a plate. :P

Tintinnabulate
05-08-2010, 07:50 AM
Hmm its ok but maybe a bit more work and twisting some stuff would make it better :) E.g. the bottom bit.

Suspective
05-08-2010, 07:51 AM
Its all uneven. The evenness automatically puts me off it. I'm afraid. soz.

Jessicrawrr
05-08-2010, 08:27 AM
You really need to make it more cake-like and habbo like then it would be good :)

.Devilish..
05-08-2010, 08:30 AM
It's a bit rushed, but still quite good. I would neaten up on lines and make the edges more neat.

dbgtz
05-08-2010, 10:24 AM
You need to learn isometric angling before you can do habbo styled graphics.

Nemo
05-08-2010, 12:53 PM
as said before, looks like a hous ethat has gone wrong. Perhaps take more time smoothing the edges and keeping them within the lines. Perhaps a more rounded cake aswell. Keep trying though, you're sure to get better.

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