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Jamiie
02-08-2010, 09:00 PM
Havn't done a alt in Ages so yeh i suck abit
But heres what i done
http://www.habboxforum.com/[IMG]http://i29.tinypic.com/e67viw.pnghttp://i29.tinypic.com/e67viw.png
Thanks

Amberr
02-08-2010, 09:40 PM
I think its pretty nice, I like the dress not to sure on the hair though. I think one thing that you may need to work on is shading but apart from that nice try :)

Jamiie
02-08-2010, 10:01 PM
I think its pretty nice, I like the dress not to sure on the hair though. I think one thing that you may need to work on is shading but apart from that nice try :)

i will be honest im terrible at shading i end up just dotting it about so i decided not to put it on this one :P

Amberr
02-08-2010, 11:22 PM
Well the more you practice the better the outcome will be. Shading is something that can't be rushed, with abit of time being spent on the alt i'm sure you will grasp it :)

Jamiie
02-08-2010, 11:54 PM
Well the more you practice the better the outcome will be. Shading is something that can't be rushed, with abit of time being spent on the alt i'm sure you will grasp it :)

its Just i do it and zoomed in it looks epic zoom out its terrible xD
i will attempt it sometime :)

Jessicrawrr
03-08-2010, 06:59 AM
Really good work, but like amber said the shading really needs improving to make it have a really good effect,
I think the hair is really good aswell.
I love how you've done the shape of the dress, when I try to do one of those it always goes squareish so I fail alot ;P
Well done!

Mr-Trainor
03-08-2010, 09:16 AM
It looks quite nice imo but I feel that it lacks some shading on the dress/hair :)

Jessicrawrr
03-08-2010, 10:27 AM
Yeah it does, it's just a block colour and it wrecks the dress :P

Gibs960
03-08-2010, 11:10 AM
I really like it, but the hair is a bit basic, cos its really easy to draw :( But +rep anyway

Samantha
04-08-2010, 07:37 AM
The background sorta blends in with the hair Jamie, also I do agree work on your shading and you'll go far! However, I prefer your previous work.

Jamiie
04-08-2010, 09:04 AM
The background sorta blends in with the hair Jamie, also I do agree work on your shading and you'll go far! However, I prefer your previous work.

Yeh i also have to agree about my previous work, its just been a while since i done one :)
Need to get into it again

And thanks everyone for comments <3

lTraditional
04-08-2010, 10:36 AM
I really do like it and it is nice and simple aswell so it is not 'to over the top'. I can't really say it is bad because I don't think it is but I am a noob at this sort of thing so I don't really know what is right and what is not!

Jamiie
04-08-2010, 10:38 AM
I really do like it and it is nice and simple aswell so it is not 'to over the top'. I can't really say it is bad because I don't think it is but I am a noob at this sort of thing so I don't really know what is right and what is not!

To be honest i don't think its great myself just wanted to post for constructive criticism Im gunna start doing them again
See if i can get better and better :D

Nemo
05-08-2010, 12:47 AM
not sure about the black background thing, but i like the dress, despite how simple it is. The colour you choose is good. perhaps try and add some more stuff to it though

Jamiie
05-08-2010, 02:04 AM
not sure about the black background thing, but i like the dress, despite how simple it is. The colour you choose is good. perhaps try and add some more stuff to it though

the background was just to make it standout a bit n yh will do it just getting there again :)

Tintinnabulate
05-08-2010, 07:45 AM
I love the dress and when you learn how to shade, it will be even better :) Good work!

dbgtz
05-08-2010, 10:29 AM
The dress needs to be more round to be honest (looks like it would be an oval), and should have a bit more shading on the right of it on the legs part. Good attempt though.

Oh also the background wasn't needed :P

Matthew
05-08-2010, 10:34 AM
i like it!
as others said, just needs a bit of shading

Jamiie
05-08-2010, 03:23 PM
I love the dress and when you learn how to shade, it will be even better :) Good work!

i will work on it :) Thanks


The dress needs to be more round to be honest (looks like it would be an oval), and should have a bit more shading on the right of it on the legs part. Good attempt though.

Oh also the background wasn't needed :P

Cheers for Feedback :D
and yeh background was just there cuz i thought it looked okay xD


i like it!
as others said, just needs a bit of shading

Thanks and yeh im working on getting shading perfect

Floreat
05-08-2010, 05:01 PM
I like it, but just work on the shading. :D Also, I'm not sure if I'm a fan of the glow... otherwise it's a great try!

Sharon
05-08-2010, 05:42 PM
Just sort the lack of shading and it's lovely. You can make the background transparent with iaza.com btw

Jamiie
05-08-2010, 05:56 PM
Just sort the lack of shading and it's lovely. You can make the background transparent with iaza.com btw

Ahh cool, will have a look at it next time
Cheers <3

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