= Please read =

[JT-Fan]

Heya,three songs from EdgeLight my band.Please comment,these songs are fairly slow though.

Ever easy.

Did I ever,
Words from my mouth,
spoken from my lips.
Torn us apart.

When did I mention,
Speak write or listen,
proof from my heart.

Ever easy,never ever near farr,
Life that'll be ever easy,
Come inside,
in my heart.

When did I say that,
Told you I meant it,
Words from my lips,
Torn us apart.

Ever easy,never ever near farr,
Life that'll that east,
Come inside,
in my heart.

When did I say that,
Ill always need you,
Come inside
Ever easy.

[-mad-monkey-]

very good! if your band is half as good as the songs its amazing!

[thechoo]

The lyrics look and sound good.
But, it doesn't matter really... It's what the music is like, the tempo, the stylee etc...
Maybe send us sound clips?
It's all ideas! :]

[Little_Chi]

Yeah those are some good lyrics

[JT-Fan]

Awww cheers xxxx!