Opinions on the song I wrote? (:

[-K8T!E-]

So I wrote this song yesterday and I'd love to know what you think of it, be brutal! :D The lyrics are in the description box if you wana read them. (:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3m-fcuX0dQ

[dbgtz]

its complete crap
haha joking :L but i think with all songs like this, it being in a high tempo some or most of the time is just completely against the mood its trying to create but thats a general opinion.

I think overall it does appeal to the audience (that not being me), keeps a general good flow, is this your first one? and ill show my friend this cos she loves these kinds of songs, ill get an opinion from her :L

btw nice strings. haha perv joke :D

also did u do any sort of voice editing or is that the real deal?

[-K8T!E-]

its complete crap
haha joking :L but i think with all songs like this, it being in a high tempo some or most of the time is just completely against the mood its trying to create but thats a general opinion.

I think overall it does appeal to the audience (that not being me), keeps a general good flow, is this your first one? and ill show my friend this cos she loves these kinds of songs, ill get an opinion from her :L

btw nice strings. haha perv joke :D

also did u do any sort of voice editing or is that the real deal?

Yeah I get what your saying with the whole mood of the song thing. Nope I didn't edit my voice, but I did add in some harmonies and stuff after. I think its like the third or fourth song I've written. thanks + repp (:

[Judas]

i disagree with the mood-tempo thing cos this isnt really a depressed song its like **** you im done with you and moving on, so i think a slower tempo wouldnt fit well.

i think its a very good song, nice chord structure, and good meaningful lyrics. if i had to pick out one thing to improve id say the pre chorus seems a bit empty so maybe you could extend that with another two lines but it doesnt really stand out and have an impact on the song at all but its just something to consider :)

really great, keep it up :D

[MattFr]

Ahh I know nothing about chord progression and tempo and stuff but I love it, you should be signed or something haha. Your break your heart cover is awesome too, keep it up :) !

[Art]

Its good but your harmonies are a bit off sometimes tbh.

[Johno]

Its good but your harmonies are a bit off sometimes tbh.

Yeah I agree, I feel that it would be better if you lowered the volume of the harmonies too - they seem to overpower the main track at some points.

But it's quite good! :)

[Nikki]

The style of the song reminds me of Taylor swift, the lyrics are very meaningful and I can imagine that alot people could relate to the same issues you talk about in the lyrics.
+ rep I loved it.
Nice guitar ;)

[Richie]

Reminds me of jojo

you'll go far, weldone.

[-K8T!E-]

i disagree with the mood-tempo thing cos this isnt really a depressed song its like **** you im done with you and moving on, so i think a slower tempo wouldnt fit well.

i think its a very good song, nice chord structure, and good meaningful lyrics. if i had to pick out one thing to improve id say the pre chorus seems a bit empty so maybe you could extend that with another two lines but it doesnt really stand out and have an impact on the song at all but its just something to consider :)

really great, keep it up :D

Thanks :D Yeah now that you mention it I think the pre chorus might be better longer! +rep (:


Ahh I know nothing about chord progression and tempo and stuff but I love it, you should be signed or something haha. Your break your heart cover is awesome too, keep it up :) !

aw thanks (:


Its good but your harmonies are a bit off sometimes tbh.

Yeah watching it again they weren't very good at all :L


Yeah I agree, I feel that it would be better if you lowered the volume of the harmonies too - they seem to overpower the main track at some points.

But it's quite good! :)

Thanks, yeah I'll remember to turn them down a bit next time :P


The style of the song reminds me of Taylor swift, the lyrics are very meaningful and I can imagine that alot people could relate to the same issues you talk about in the lyrics.
+ rep I loved it.
Nice guitar ;)

aw thanks, I love taylor swift! Listening to so much of her music has probably rubbed off a bit haha. :P


Reminds me of jojo

you'll go far, weldone.

aw thanks Richie (:

[K-Cat]

I really love the lyrics to this song. Let's put it this way, if it was a song on the radio or something. I'd turn it up all the way.

:)