Gibs960
18-08-2010, 02:52 PM
Writing Competition, MORE INFO IN THIS THREAD (http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=659036&page=1&highlight=Writing+Competition)!
Here's my entry anyway:
I saw a glimpse of the hooded figure appear when I turned my back. ginger hair, red eyes, white skin & the most distinctive feature, his colossal teeth. He edged forward, his boots echoing like a shout in a cave. My legs turned to jelly as I fell to the floor. He lunged forward and grabbed my torso with his right hand before with his left hand he grabbed my neck and sunk his teeth into me. My pulse raced as I tried to push him off. How many more excruciating seconds would pass before he would finally stop draining me. After what felt like an eternity of him gulping down my thick, red blood. My skin turned pearl white and my eyes became a dark scarlet. What had I become? Finally I gained the strength to push the beast off me. His Scarlet eyes were wide, his skin was even whiter than my own. When I analysed his features I realised what he was - A Vampire… Did this mean I was one of them? How could I ever go back to my family without ripping them apart? These questions would soon be answered… I had to go somewhere…
It had to be 200 words btw :)
Here's my entry anyway:
I saw a glimpse of the hooded figure appear when I turned my back. ginger hair, red eyes, white skin & the most distinctive feature, his colossal teeth. He edged forward, his boots echoing like a shout in a cave. My legs turned to jelly as I fell to the floor. He lunged forward and grabbed my torso with his right hand before with his left hand he grabbed my neck and sunk his teeth into me. My pulse raced as I tried to push him off. How many more excruciating seconds would pass before he would finally stop draining me. After what felt like an eternity of him gulping down my thick, red blood. My skin turned pearl white and my eyes became a dark scarlet. What had I become? Finally I gained the strength to push the beast off me. His Scarlet eyes were wide, his skin was even whiter than my own. When I analysed his features I realised what he was - A Vampire… Did this mean I was one of them? How could I ever go back to my family without ripping them apart? These questions would soon be answered… I had to go somewhere…
It had to be 200 words btw :)