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K-Cat
19-08-2010, 09:17 AM
Another song I wrote a few weeks ago. I hope you like it.
Feedback is welcomed once again. :)

Are you guys going out?
It seems youre always together.
'Cause it seems more like,
she taking you for granted.
But what she dosen't see,
is that theres more.
Behind your looks.
But I see it,
and it's all that I'm looking for.
You call Katey up,
he's yelling at the phone now.
He saw her moving it,
she was using him.
Now he feelslike such an idiot,
dosen't look like she cares.
(Chorus)
Hey there boy,
open your eyes!
I'm right here by your side,
and I love you,
but it's hidden inside.
I now it feels as if you've got nothing left,
but I could be your love.
Yeah,
you know we could be more than just friends.
Open your eyes now!
C'mon,
you've got to see me.
Ya know,
I want to be your love.
Just love to be your love.
(Chorus End)
He was always,
giving her the attention.
Being hot,
to be the guy she'd mention.
He was dedicted,
but she was a hater.
The gir wasen't fine,
no she didn't appreciate him.
C'mon forget that girl,
you've got a girl right here.
She was a player,
and she aint coming back now.
Now he's forgettin' her,
and looking for another.
C'mon I'm right infront of her face,
don't have to look any farther,
'cause I'd love to be your lover.
(Chorus Repeat)
C'mon,
what do you have to lose?
Don't be afraid to get with me.
You've broken up,
you're all alone now.
Don't worry,
it happens to everyone at sometime.
life goes on,
let her go.
Come back out and find some more.
Call me up,
it's the beginning of a new school year.
I'l lwalk you to school.
Be waiting at your door now.
I think that he's finally realized,
whatI met by "a new one".
(Chorus Repeat)
Now you know what to do,
so what wil you decide to do?

Sly
20-08-2010, 12:35 AM
The lines you stole out of 'Good Charlotte - I don't Wanna be In Love' are good but the rest of it is crap.

K-Cat
20-08-2010, 06:46 PM
The lines you stole out of 'Good Charlotte - I don't Wanna be In Love' are good but the rest of it is crap.

Wow, I pity if you ever get married and you say that to the person you marry.
Or if you ever have kids.

You're a sick person.

wizzhan00
20-08-2010, 06:49 PM
this is good i like it :)

K-Cat
20-08-2010, 07:07 PM
this is good i like it :)

Thanks a lot. :)

FlyingJesus
20-08-2010, 10:55 PM
Wow, I pity if you ever get married and you say that to the person you marry.
Or if you ever have kids.

You're a sick person.

And why might that be? There's no point whatsoever in telling someone that their work is great if it isn't, that way they just gain an unwarranted ego and make an even bigger fool of themselves by trying to put themselves out there and getting laughed out of every professional office.

Sly
21-08-2010, 12:40 AM
I doubt the situation of someone steeling good Charlotte lyrics and trying to put them across as there own will ever occur again, and the chances of it re-occurring and the person who does it also being my wife/child is just a bit too unlikely for my liking for you to even think you need to mention it ;S

Nemo
21-08-2010, 12:42 AM
Wow, I pity if you ever get married and you say that to the person you marry.
Or if you ever have kids.

You're a sick person.Woah, someone needs to chill the **** down.


Im no good at judging lyrics but honestly, calm down there.

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