Glopy
20-08-2010, 10:34 PM
Hay. i made up a poem for the what a writter compotion, it didnt win but i would still like someone people to have a look at it and see what they think ;)
i went to the beach one day, and saw a robot, quite odd, quite gay.
one leg made from copper, the other from tin,
With a denim skirt, size 14, quite thin.
the robot he walked away,
I went underwater one day,
And saw the robot, quite odd, quite gay.
with a heart of gold, and a chest of iron
and a scarf quite like a lions,
this robot he walked away,
I went under water again
to find this under dressed man
with metal on the ground
he stood quite proud.
Hes opinions out loud.
this man he looked quite gay
And no longer walked away <3
Ok if you didnt get my poem. it was about a gay guy, who locked himself away inside a robot taking orders from the world on how hes sexuality must be, who one day ran away under sea to escape this. where metal was not expected underwater (being made to be someone) so the water rusted it away, and out came a man. (kinda like coming out of the closet) , proud of who he is and no longer runs away.
i went to the beach one day, and saw a robot, quite odd, quite gay.
one leg made from copper, the other from tin,
With a denim skirt, size 14, quite thin.
the robot he walked away,
I went underwater one day,
And saw the robot, quite odd, quite gay.
with a heart of gold, and a chest of iron
and a scarf quite like a lions,
this robot he walked away,
I went under water again
to find this under dressed man
with metal on the ground
he stood quite proud.
Hes opinions out loud.
this man he looked quite gay
And no longer walked away <3
Ok if you didnt get my poem. it was about a gay guy, who locked himself away inside a robot taking orders from the world on how hes sexuality must be, who one day ran away under sea to escape this. where metal was not expected underwater (being made to be someone) so the water rusted it away, and out came a man. (kinda like coming out of the closet) , proud of who he is and no longer runs away.