Simple Dress alts

[rokgal]

ALthough it is a simple dress alt im sure ive messed it up somehow xD so yeah comment ect and any ideas what i should make next cos im attempting making a publice room from scratch ill show it here too ;P btw the public room ent done just started

http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/vcxxvchbcn/DressAlt.png


ANd heres the public room base


http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy257/neonsockzx/WIP1.png

[Samantha]

The first one, the bottom of the dress doesn't go round her body. It reminds me of old Polly Pockets :). But it could be improved with more shading!

And the public room looks ok. But the squares aren't that visible in a normal room :)

[dbgtz]

@ The dress. The belt goes round yes? Then the bottom of the dress should be too. The colour you chosen also seems to be the default blue and its just icky. Keep experimenting with colours.

@ The public room. You need to make the tiles fit the room properly, so no half tiles etc or it just looks dodgy

[Colossus]

The bottom of the dress looks really boxy if you get me, try and curve it around.

[RandomManJay]

The shading needs improving on the dress and its bottom has a square shape, try curving it in line with the belt. I don't want to judge the public room since it looks like the image has been resized before or during upload. Try removing as much of the unused canvas as possible and try uploading it again.