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Romerdo
24-10-2010, 10:26 PM
My Restaurant

iBlueBox
24-10-2010, 10:53 PM
My Restaurant

A Lot Of The Furniture seems out of place,

the cobble,
the angel on the tile

also, the candles, if you put a z shelf on the table then add the candles they'll look as if their in the middle of the table

KyoraStryker
25-10-2010, 03:02 AM
Here's my scoop:

» The placement of the candles is a great thought, but it just doesn't look like it belongs. I haven't tried Stexual's idea, but it's worth a shot.
» The vase of flowers should be placed right next to the long sofa.
» The disco ball has to go. The piano/microphone on the stage flooring gives the impression that the atmosphere is mellow; a disco ball gives off an upbeat party atmosphere, imo.
» Not quite sure what you're going for with the statue on the random tile. The color of the tile doesn't go with the room's colors. A brown tile may make it look better if you're intent is to keep the statue.

Regardless of my critique, it's an excellent concept and still well designed. With a little work, I'm sure you can make the room look pro.

giltinux
27-10-2010, 09:35 AM
dont be mad on me but i dont like it :(

Apple
27-10-2010, 01:59 PM
Should definitely remove the cobbles and that plant pot at the front of the stage. Other than that it's looking pretty original!

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