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Jaxt
25-10-2010, 01:35 AM
http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn56/MiniBryan-/lifeisshort.png

Took me awhile, how do you think I can improve this? :)

KyoraStryker
25-10-2010, 02:50 AM
Oh wow, I like it a lot!

I don't even know what to say in terms of constructive criticism. I don't have an eye for alts and pixel art, so I'm not sure if I could offer any suggestions.

Regardless, it still looks great; keep up the good work!

Felix
25-10-2010, 03:50 AM
WOW, That is just amazing,
I would suggest you apply for a job in our Graphic's Deprtment

Jaxt
25-10-2010, 04:01 AM
Thanks guys. I am already thinking of applying. :)

dbgtz
26-10-2010, 09:58 AM
The grass could come up at points around his body as it kinda looks 2d there.
Is the background from the infobus or did you make it?
Maybe cut down on the guitar strings, yes they have 6 irl but it looks too busy tbh.
And his chest/shoulders seem kinda small
apart from that it's pretty cool.

RandomManJay
29-10-2010, 12:03 AM
Brilliant work. The one thing I don't really like is that his leg which is stretched out seems quite flat and 2D to me. Also the guitar looks a bit warped with how its shapen and how the strings travel across it, also the top end doesn't have much shading on it.

Jaxt
29-10-2010, 07:38 AM
I haven't been doing this kind of work for long and the guitar strings were pretty hard. Thanks for the comments guys.

Yeah, most of the background is from the infrobus.

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