SP entry- Super Saiyan.

[Tidings]

Couldn't really think of my own design, and the rules Didn't say anything about recreating!
Just, the colours are a little off... its a little too, well, electric.
anyway, thoughts? :D

http://i55.tinypic.com/4qr95.png

[RandomManJay]

I like it, but I think the hair might be a bit too complex and it looks a bit confusing. Also it doesn't really fit with out how Super Saiyan hair 'naturally' falls. Even if its Super Saiyan 2, it still sort of seperates out evenly. It looks like some parts at the back are trying to point forwards. Also think the shading is a bit too harsh and the yellow outline might not be enough as it doesn't really look its glowing, and I had to zoom in just to make sure it was a general theme and not a pixel error because the line is only 1px in width.

Its a really good attempt though :D. +Rep.

[Tidings]

haha yeah, it was a quick fix up the back of it isn't supposed to be a straight line, i had stems of parts that didn't save, So just making do with what I had. the outline at the back is for the same reason, It looked a bit odd without it because the outline just didn't have the shade to it as it being bright, not to make it glow, I tried that and failed.
Hey its my first attempt in 2 years!

and thanks! :)