Rate / Slate Layout

[iLogan]

Hey,

Could you guys rate or slate this Christmas layout, thanks.


http://www.teenkid.co.uk

Thanks

[Chippiewill]

It's a bit early tbh, that body font is horrific at best unfortunately and it looks like you've googled Christmas and pasted it onto the page.

/slate

I like the snowflakes, but, 3/10

[koony]

Great page. I really like the punctuation and grammar of the page however I think you need to improve the layout on your paragraphs, such as spacing ect. Personally I don't like the writing style, but meh. I like the buttons although unless they are hovered over you might not know they were there lol. Awesome work though.

[iLogan]

It's a bit early tbh, that body font is horrific at best unfortunately and it looks like you've googled Christmas and pasted it onto the page.

/slate

I like the snowflakes, but, 3/10

Thanks, I also agree with the whole early thing, although it is only 34 days, and you can't go to one shopping mall without their Christmas campaign in full swing, also most of the management @ Habbox have Christmas related signatures :P - what font do you suggest?


Great page. I really like the punctuation and grammar of the page however I think you need to improve the layout on your paragraphs, such as spacing ect. Personally I don't like the writing style, but meh. I like the buttons although unless they are hovered over you might not know they were there lol. Awesome work though.

Thanks! Will be working on the paragraphing.

[Felix]

Hey, its nice though it needs a few touch ups. For example;

The background is to original.
Very plain text
add more content.

4.5/10

[Samantha]

I really like the punctuation and grammar

Why does it say 'Teenage Holding page' should it be a lower case H?
I think it's a bit too repetitive in the paragraph, you said layout so I will discuss that now.
I think the 'TeenKid' blends in too much with the background.
I like the colours though.

[Jahova]

Slow loading for me.

[Conservative,]

The snow flakes are nice but I think the background is too basic, not a nice font & the photos are a bit tacky. Could be good with some adjustments though!

[iRaaave.]

its quite nice but the only thing i dislike is the text.

[irGemma]

Erm im not to sure ill give it a 6/10