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Neptune
11-08-2005, 06:55 AM
this took a lot of time:BangHead: . Pure Scratch. Done on paint except for the edge of the ocean part. im sure there are many pixel errors, since it is such a big alt.
i took my shading technique a little further, and actually made shadows.
plz take a good look before posting, i didnt want to do all this work just for measly glances. Rate /10

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2683/aircraftcarrier6ab.png

chipie60
11-08-2005, 06:57 AM
Its very good, Excellent shading. + rep if can ;]

alex126
11-08-2005, 06:59 AM
Very good +rep

Ekalb
11-08-2005, 07:15 AM
Very good
Although when you zoom in on paint it looks like scrible..
The wings on the jets should be straight not curved?
Then again maybe not
Some of the shadows look kind of strange
And the last building scruture to the rear of the ship looks wonky but i think it meant to be like that because of the angle
Btw why purple flames?
im trying to pick it apart for everything tht i can but there isnt much and i probably couldnt do better
Wrongs ection too
9.5/10

Neptune
11-08-2005, 07:20 AM
ah like i said pixel errors, but i dunno how to fix em. the shadows look weird cuz its spose to be at about sunset(or sunrise) and for the purple flames, when some modern jets go into afterburner [speed up] they have purple flames.
er-wut section shud it go in? for future

Ekalb
11-08-2005, 07:32 AM
Well it isnt a habbo alteration
So go to Non habbo related alterations or w/e its called

Wootzeh
11-08-2005, 07:38 AM
neptune, the ship looks like its sinking.
You can do alot better than this.
You didn't even you 2x1 lines.

Roboevil
11-08-2005, 07:54 AM
I think it's very good, some of the angles are funny and the bow is lower than the stern.

*~* Manda *~*
11-08-2005, 12:06 PM
some small errors which can easily be fixed but the shading is absolutely amazing. + rep :)

DJ-PIEEE
11-08-2005, 01:25 PM
Yeah very good +rep

Smits
11-08-2005, 01:27 PM
very gd indeed +rep if i can

flame
11-08-2005, 04:54 PM
thats very good i will give rep if i can

Neptune
11-08-2005, 05:59 PM
I think it's very good, some of the angles are funny and the bow is lower than the stern.

i know it sounds like im making excuses, but i know what the problem is. the grey part on the top of the ship is completely flat. ur looking at it as if the non isometric lines are slopes. the bow isnt LOWER than the stern, its more narrow.


neptune, the ship looks like its sinking.
You can do alot better than this.
You didn't even you 2x1 lines.

i dunno how u see the ship sinking.. it looks pretty proportionate if u look it up in google. and for the 2x1 lines, just like ive stated above, the front end where the jet catapults are isnt exactly straight, it slightly gets wider as it reaches the middle of the ship
heres a perfect diagram (except i did the stern a bit differently).

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3228/diagram6oh.png

Steve20
11-08-2005, 06:00 PM
i know it sounds like im making excuses, but i know what the problem is. the grey part on the top of the ship is completely flat. ur looking at it as if the non isometric lines are slopes.



i dunno how u see the ship sinking.. it looks pretty proportionate if u look it up in google. and for the 2x1 lines, just like ive stated above, the front end where the jet catapults are isnt exactly straight, it slightly gets wider as it reaches the middle of the ship
heres a perfect diagram (except i did the stern a bit differently).

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3228/diagram6oh.png

Where stand's Rep?

!:Joe:!
11-08-2005, 07:55 PM
Amazing work 10/10 +rep if i can :)

.mcgovlau.
11-08-2005, 08:00 PM
Great work as usual, I don't know what's wrong with the people saying its bad, because obviously they can't do the work that you do. Keep alting hunny <3

Adam$
11-08-2005, 08:07 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9936/aircraftcarrier0fn.png

Extremely good. I would rep, but..

You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Neptune again.

Neptune
12-08-2005, 04:36 AM
Where stand's Rep?
uhhh... what?

Pacers
12-08-2005, 07:40 AM
Great work as usual, I don't know what's wrong with the people saying its bad, because obviously they can't do the work that you do. Keep alting hunny <3

i agree ... ne1 of the ppl who posted sumtin saying that this is wrong and this is wrong and thats wrong...r u ppl seriousely saying that there shud be no errors on an alt of this size and these many small details ??? Honestly, this is 10/10 + rep and yet again shud be an elite :)

p.s. Neptune even said there might be a few pixel errors here and there and u still find sumtin bad to say....shame on u

Dudey!
12-08-2005, 01:06 PM
Amazing Work!! +REP

Neptune
13-08-2005, 12:46 AM
i agree ... ne1 of the ppl who posted sumtin saying that this is wrong and this is wrong and thats wrong...r u ppl seriousely saying that there shud be no errors on an alt of this size and these many small details ??? Honestly, this is 10/10 + rep and yet again shud be an elite :)

p.s. Neptune even said there might be a few pixel errors here and there and u still find sumtin bad to say....shame on u
ty :)

bondish
13-08-2005, 04:13 PM
10/10 its brill.i like big alts they are brill.i like how you have gone one step further by even adding very very very tiny habbos.thats really cool.i wud not have the patience to do something like that 10/10.well done

Neptune
14-08-2005, 02:30 AM
i like how you have gone one step further by even adding very very very tiny habbos.

Well it isnt a habbo alteration
So go to Non habbo related alterations or w/e its called
wudnt that sorta make it habbo-like?

Ekalb
14-08-2005, 02:56 AM
wudnt that sorta make it habbo-like?
uhh what?
This is in the wrong section
Pixel art goes in non habbo alterations because they arent habbo alterations

Neptune
14-08-2005, 08:14 PM
no mod seems to be moving it :s

-sFusion-
14-08-2005, 08:16 PM
wow from scratch?? its really good :) 10/10 +rep

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