The Don
10-12-2010, 09:43 AM
It's for a contest where the storyline states that it's about a man who kills his wife :l I know, kind of depressing. I enjoyed writing this one and I think it's my best so far :D what do you all think?
My dearest girl, how pretty you look.
I loved you so, my heart, you took!
I opened my guard, I lowered my shield.
I loved you so, but hatred can’t be healed.
My dearest bride, how elegant you seemed.
I loved you so, you’re now a fiend.
The fire has spread, all over the rug.
Hell is waiting, your grave, I’ve dug.
My dearest wife, how great we were,
I loved you so, my words now slur.
I’ve drank too much, this is the last,
The last time I reminisce our past.
My dearest wife, or should I say ex?
The curse you laid, your spell, your hex.
You cursed me with love, how bitter, how sweet,
It won’t be long until we meet.
A minute, or two, it can’t be long,
I’m choking on smoke, the pain, be gone!
My dearest girl, how pretty you look.
I loved you so, my heart, you took!
I opened my guard, I lowered my shield.
I loved you so, but hatred can’t be healed.
My dearest bride, how elegant you seemed.
I loved you so, you’re now a fiend.
The fire has spread, all over the rug.
Hell is waiting, your grave, I’ve dug.
My dearest wife, how great we were,
I loved you so, my words now slur.
I’ve drank too much, this is the last,
The last time I reminisce our past.
My dearest wife, or should I say ex?
The curse you laid, your spell, your hex.
You cursed me with love, how bitter, how sweet,
It won’t be long until we meet.
A minute, or two, it can’t be long,
I’m choking on smoke, the pain, be gone!