View Full Version : [Alteration] First Enlargement :)
lawrawrrr
24-01-2011, 11:11 PM
.... and probably my last.
Don't have the original pic, but you get the idea XD
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt21/smilie_loz_x/Untitled-2.png
cc welcome :)
Looks good :D Welldone :)
Circadia
24-01-2011, 11:38 PM
The lines are a bit funny, and the line around the feet is thicker, and there's a pixel error on the shorts, the shading is a bit funny. But its a great attempt for a first time :)
lawrawrrr
24-01-2011, 11:42 PM
Yeah enlargements definitely aren't my thing - couldn't be bothered to perfect it tbh! *goes back to chibis* XD
Rottentroll
25-01-2011, 02:37 PM
I love the feet.
Eoin247
25-01-2011, 02:50 PM
It's really great, especially for a first time! :) +Rep
Jacob
25-01-2011, 03:36 PM
That's really good ;) First time enlargement and that is really quite something!
Samantha
25-01-2011, 05:49 PM
I actually like it.
Like others said just work on the line art.
Also do shading it works wonders. Even if there is none there it may look odd so put some in. it's your own vision :).
Liking the hoody.
lawrawrrr
25-01-2011, 05:51 PM
I actually like it.
Like others said just work on the line art.
Also do shading it works wonders. Even if there is none there it may look odd so put some in. it's your own vision :).
Liking the hoody.
thanks - this was actually the first graphic I ever made, so i know a lot more about shading and stuff now. I'll probably have another go once i've finished my (very long) chibi list! Thankyou! <3
Hayleigh
25-01-2011, 08:31 PM
I really like it especially the clothes :) and the hoody :P
RandomManJay
27-01-2011, 10:08 AM
It's quite good for a first alteration. Some of the lines are a bit off and don't fully conform with habbo, but other than its a good start. Keep at it :D!
orientalframe?
28-01-2011, 04:32 PM
Well done Laura! :D I love the hoody - but work on the lines on the feet +rep when I can :)
It's good for the first, mine was far worse ha! You just need to smoothen the edges of it out more and try and add some more shading I reckon, otherwise it's good. :)
dbgtz
28-01-2011, 08:05 PM
.... and probably my last.
Don't have the original pic, but you get the idea XD
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt21/smilie_loz_x/Untitled-2.png
cc welcome :)
It annoys me how something like this gets rep? I recognise you took time and effort but it needs to do a lot to improve. Some parts look like it was drawn free hand, resulting in jagged lines and the black lines being 2 pixels thick. There is pretty much no shading what so ever and the stripes on the jumper isn't straight and it is not properly isometric either. The nose isn't round either, it's square with smooth edges. The hair is just squigly lines aswell, no real shading or anything.
lawrawrrr
28-01-2011, 09:58 PM
I never said it was amazing, or perfect, or even any good. I was just looking for a few helpful pointers on where to improve if I decide to ever to another one.
I wasn't asking for rep either - that's whoever repped me's choice TBH.
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