Samantha
30-01-2011, 08:00 PM
I was just looking on the Habbox site and I am not being a grammar nazi but some of the things on it didn't make sense to me.
The errors I found were on the staff list.
Firstly, Hecktix's description:
Hecktix is the Assistant General Manager for Staff. This means that Hecktix is involved a lot with the hiring and firing of many members of staff at Habbox as well of being in charge of HabboxForum and its managers. He helps guide them to ensure that the forum is performing at its best.
Shouldn't that be as not of.
Also 'a lot' isn't really needed.
Bolt660 is the Assistant General Manager of the Community. Bolt660 is in charge of many departments including events. This is an important job as it helps raise Habbox's profile within the Habbo community as well as giving all of you lucky users of Habbox many competitions, events and radio shows to keep you occupied, all of the time!
On the site 'Bolt660' is black and the rest of the writing is grey, maybe this needs changing.
And on 'Events Organizers' shouldn't it be Organisers, as the rest isn't english (us).
And on rare value reporters
voodoopoo2# has a habbo at an angle not straight on so stops the consistency too.
The errors I found were on the staff list.
Firstly, Hecktix's description:
Hecktix is the Assistant General Manager for Staff. This means that Hecktix is involved a lot with the hiring and firing of many members of staff at Habbox as well of being in charge of HabboxForum and its managers. He helps guide them to ensure that the forum is performing at its best.
Shouldn't that be as not of.
Also 'a lot' isn't really needed.
Bolt660 is the Assistant General Manager of the Community. Bolt660 is in charge of many departments including events. This is an important job as it helps raise Habbox's profile within the Habbo community as well as giving all of you lucky users of Habbox many competitions, events and radio shows to keep you occupied, all of the time!
On the site 'Bolt660' is black and the rest of the writing is grey, maybe this needs changing.
And on 'Events Organizers' shouldn't it be Organisers, as the rest isn't english (us).
And on rare value reporters
voodoopoo2# has a habbo at an angle not straight on so stops the consistency too.