(Rok) Random poem (Rok)

[rokgal]

Well we've been doing poetry in my class recently and i just thought i could post one i made. :)

Walking along the beach
When i notice..
your beautiful lips shine,
So bright in the moonlight.

The rain falls heavier now,
We hold hands and run for cover..
We stare into each others eyes
And our souls entwine through a kiss.


But its unfinished :(

[kuzkasate]

Looking good so far, would like to see the finished version :D

[Special-1k]

It's very nice so far. Can't wait too see the finished project.

[Gina]

try finishing it, I'd love to hear the finished copy
FIRST kfnx