Opinion on this song! + Rep :)

[-Katie]

I wrote this today, I'd love to know what you think, be as harsh as you like, I want criticism as long as its constructive :P


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VH-fTFO-JC4

[.Shaun,,]

I like it! :) Don't think you need to improve! :)

[-Katie]

I like it! :) Don't think you need to improve! :)
God idk about not needing to improve but I'm glad you like it! :)

[Judas]

there's always room to improve :)

firstly great job
first improvement ... *you're hehe ;)

i LOVE the guitar part in the verses, and i really like your voice i think you have a lovely tone and quite a good range

however i think it's kind of a typical acoustic break up song if you get me, like i think you should incorporate something different into your music that separates you from the rest... unfortunately i can't think of anything right now but it's you, come up with something really unique and amazing because you definitely have a lot of talent :) i think by listening to a load of different genres and experimenting with different sounds you could develop your music further and create something wonderful

+rep for an amazing song :)
..and also, you're beautiful

[Conservative,]

there's always room to improve :)

firstly great job
first improvement ... *you're hehe ;)

i LOVE the guitar part in the verses, and i really like your voice i think you have a lovely tone and quite a good range

however i think it's kind of a typical acoustic break up song if you get me, like i think you should incorporate something different into your music that separates you from the rest... unfortunately i can't think of anything right now but it's you, come up with something really unique and amazing because you definitely have a lot of talent :) i think by listening to a load of different genres and experimenting with different sounds you could develop your music further and create something wonderful

+rep for an amazing song :)
..and also, you're beautiful

Ditto this tbh. Word for word.

Really good, you're beautiful, and I love the song :)

The guitar part is good. The only bit is the vocals were slightly shaky in parts but that's just practice, confidence etc.

Brilliant song, love it. +rep

[Jessicrawrr]

KATIE!!!
You are actually amazing, that song is beautiful, so are you;D
I'm sure i've subscribed to your youtube.
+rep katie, amazing vocals, amazing everything!

[-Katie]

there's always room to improve :)

firstly great job
first improvement ... *you're hehe ;)

i LOVE the guitar part in the verses, and i really like your voice i think you have a lovely tone and quite a good range

however i think it's kind of a typical acoustic break up song if you get me, like i think you should incorporate something different into your music that separates you from the rest... unfortunately i can't think of anything right now but it's you, come up with something really unique and amazing because you definitely have a lot of talent :) i think by listening to a load of different genres and experimenting with different sounds you could develop your music further and create something wonderful

+rep for an amazing song :)
..and also, you're beautiful
Thanks! Yeah I get what your saying about the lyrics I'll try and work on that!

Ditto this tbh. Word for word.

Really good, you're beautiful, and I love the song :)

The guitar part is good. The only bit is the vocals were slightly shaky in parts but that's just practice, confidence etc.

Brilliant song, love it. +rep
Yeah I'm not the best singer haha :P Thanks though!

KATIE!!!
You are actually amazing, that song is beautiful, so are you;D
I'm sure i've subscribed to your youtube.
+rep katie, amazing vocals, amazing everything!
Aw thanks Jessie <3