[iAndy-] Alteration

[Andy-]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7943/altx.png (http://img232.imageshack.us/i/altx.png/)
This is a alt that I made never took my that long but yeah. Feel free to criticise.

[Maatt.]

Its very nice :)
i love the long coat ;D

+rep

[LouTheBunny]

Its okay, but maybe you could of added some shading to the right arm.

[Andy-]

Thanks ill fix it tommorow as im on my mobile now

[Mark]

Wow! Nice alt, his eyes look like he is high on drugs. +Rep!

[Andy-]

Lool thanks

[tylermunjkt]

Im liking the glasses and coat andy :)

[Andy-]

Thanks alot

[Andy-]

Second attempt I just added a quick line of shading on the right armhttp://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4894/mand.png

[orientalframe?]

Looks nice, though the briefcase looks a bit dodgy as its under the shoes? But apart from that its really good :)

[Andy-]

Never noticed that

[Zuth]

Very nice! Well done! Just looks a bit wired lol

[rokgal]

broken image :(

[Gibs960]

It's good but I don't like the briefcase hand, looks like the briefcase is floating.

[Eoin247]

Very nice :) +Rep

Only thing is the briefcase is a little bit too low i think, apart from that great work!

[Elegance]

Yeah, the briefcase is quite dodgey, I thought it was a gun at first.. o_O
Other than that its really good, well done.

[Amberr]

It looks ok, you haven't really changed much of it though. As people have allready pointed out, the briefcase looks odd as its below the shoes. Also maybe add some shading or more detail onto it to make it more obvious to what it actually is because atm it just looks like you have just drawn a square. Not to sure on the glasses either ;L Apart from that a good attempt :)