Conservative,
17-02-2011, 11:21 PM
I hate poems, and English in general if I'm honest, but I'm quite happy with this so thought I'd share it with you guys.
CC is welcome - but nothing rude ;)
It's on conflict because that's our subject - it's about a soldier in Afghanistan. I'll probably extend it, but this is what I have so far.
A man fires a rifle,
He’s fighting for you,
He is a hero,
But you don’t know the things he’d do
In the desert he fought,
For the safety and protection of others
He laid down his life
For the children and mothers
And although he survived,
He is mentally scarred,
From the things that he did,
Fighting the enemy guard,
And you the readers back home,
He’s fighting for you,
But you’ll never think about
The things he’d do
Thoughts?
CC is welcome - but nothing rude ;)
It's on conflict because that's our subject - it's about a soldier in Afghanistan. I'll probably extend it, but this is what I have so far.
A man fires a rifle,
He’s fighting for you,
He is a hero,
But you don’t know the things he’d do
In the desert he fought,
For the safety and protection of others
He laid down his life
For the children and mothers
And although he survived,
He is mentally scarred,
From the things that he did,
Fighting the enemy guard,
And you the readers back home,
He’s fighting for you,
But you’ll never think about
The things he’d do
Thoughts?