My 1st alt's

[Lamz]

Ok So... I have NEVER done/attempted alt's before and i finally decided to give it a go... i know their not the best in the world but can you give me some advice/hints/tips & feedback on these please...


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Ice Collection. Vol 1

[RiotxChrissy]

their freaking awsome C:

[Lamz]

their freaking awsome C:

thanks :)

[Nick]

The thrones left arm stuffed up and missing the black lines towards the back of the throne. Try using different colors then just one and a small shade of black.

The dj is is alright :) Try change the buttons on the dj to like a grey or something

and theres not much done with the seat but welldone!

[Zuth]

The thrones left arm stuffed up and missing the black lines towards the back of the throne. Try using different colors then just one and a small shade of black.

The dj is is alright :) Try change the buttons on the dj to like a grey or something

and theres not much done with the seat but welldone!

I'd say the same as nick really, try using different colors, makes it look much better :P

[Nick]

I'd say the same as nick really, try using different colors, makes it look much better :P

Although it is ice furni so maybe try different shades of light blue

[Chris]

They look great for your first alts, maybe try fixing the arm on the throne though.

[Zuth]

Although it is ice furni so maybe try different shades of light blue

That's what I ment Lool :P

[Lamz]

The thrones left arm stuffed up and missing the black lines towards the back of the throne. Try using different colors then just one and a small shade of black.

The dj is is alright :) Try change the buttons on the dj to like a grey or something

and theres not much done with the seat but welldone!
i see what u mean now,, thanks nick :) ill work on it today

I'd say the same as nick really, try using different colors, makes it look much better :P
ill try do a neon collection green's, yellow's, purple...

Although it is ice furni so maybe try different shades of light blue
ill try :)

They look great for your first alts, maybe try fixing the arm on the throne though.
thanks :)

Thankyou for all your help ill publish the edits a.s.a.p
:)

[Lamz]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2rmtbur.png

That better?

[iLogan]

Well done Lamara!

Really good.

[Elegance]

Good for first attempts, but it looks like you've just inverted the colours :S

[Lamz]

Well done Lamara!

Really good.
aww thanks cheesecake ;)

Good for first attempts, but it looks like you've just inverted the colours :S
ty & nope spent 3 hours manually changing colous

[Janet Snakehole]

Love them, definitely think you should try work with different shades of blue though. They're a little too light for my liking!

[Maatt.]

They are very good for a first ;)

Maybe make it a little darker? :)

[rnix]

These are actually recolors :) But good effort... don't like the colors though :(

[Jessicrawrr]

don't like the colours you've used, the blend in with eachother too much, and you've stuffed up on the throne's arm, and on the edited version.
6/10, ok first attempt.

[prettyhotpixie]

looks better, well done:)

[Lamz]

Love them, definitely think you should try work with different shades of blue though. They're a little too light for my liking!
Im gonna try work on a gothic collection... red, silver, grey & black :)

They are very good for a first ;)

Maybe make it a little darker? :)
I gonna see how i go with dark colours. :)

These are actually recolors :) But good effort... don't like the colors though :(
Smarty Pants ;) Ill try dark colours and see how it goes :)

don't like the colours you've used, the blend in with eachother too much, and you've stuffed up on the throne's arm, and on the edited version.
6/10, ok first attempt.
You don't seem to like anything i do outside of Hxl do ya. Oh well... thanks for the feedback, hopefully you will like the gothic collection.

looks better, well done:)
thanks :)

[SaltNvinigar]

They are nice,

9/10

[Lamz]

thanks, i wudn't say 9/10 i think there 6/10

[Jessicrawrr]

You don't seem to like anything i do outside of Hxl do ya. Oh well... thanks for the feedback, hopefully you will like the gothic collection.



No i'm giving constructive criticism so you can improve, unlike most of the graphics forum, sorry to burst your bubble.

[Lamz]

No i'm giving constructive criticism so you can improve, unlike most of the graphics forum, sorry to burst your bubble.

theres wasn't a bubble in the 1st place... i said thanks for it. i havn't done this b4 so its nice your helping me get better

[Nick]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2rmtbur.png

That better?

Its still not right about at the seat yet but it look much better :)

[Lamz]

Its still not right about at the seat yet but it look much better :)

:s english?

[Nick]

:s english?

I am speaking english lol :P

[GreenCrayons.]

I would say put them in a room corner or something and with photoshop change their opacity so they appear see through, you can do it on ms paint but will have to mix colours and all which may be abit advanced atm, this will make them look like ice :)

[Lamz]

I would say put them in a room corner or something and with photoshop change their opacity so they appear see through, you can do it on ms paint but will have to mix colours and all which may be abit advanced atm, this will make them look like ice :)
yh i see what you mean,, ill do it when i have time to spare :)

[Andy-]

I liek numebr 2 the best, I don't really like all of them overall as they are too bright, btu overall good job.

[Lamz]

^^^
ty

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Changed the opacity of the others & thats a lil pokeball kinda thing i tryed to do

[Lamz]

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