Hotel Plaza

[Cosmic]

This is basically an outdoorsey-type area that I have reused for the hotel that I built. It's not fantastic, but any constructive criticism would be appreciated:

http://i51.tinypic.com/fw1zxt.jpg

[Eoin247]

Ah this is quite good :) +Rep

But shouldn't it be the reception on the right?

[Suspective]

I really like it especially the middle area with all the green plants and hedges. I can't fault it at all.

+REP

[Mark]

Really good room!

[Roxy]

The overall layout and the way it's been set out is really good although imo the middle looks a bit empty and the section on the right looks fairly plain.

Perhaps try turning the middle bit into more of a picnicy area (not sure how much space there'd be) or even just add a path, few benches and some more plants so it seems more like a garden. For the right hand bit if you want to stick with the pool kind of theme, try adding some more skyscraper windows and put parasols inbetween the deck chairs. I think it'd look better if you covered the floor too with some kind of patch (field grass perhaps or even tiki sands) because atm it looks more like that section of the room is indoors if ya get what I mean? :P

I do love the way you've set the room out though

[Cosmic]

Ah this is quite good :) +Rep

But shouldn't it be the reception on the right?

It's supposed to just be an outside area; the reception is through the door teleport. Thanks for the rep :D


I really like it especially the middle area with all the green plants and hedges. I can't fault it at all.

+REP

Thanks!


Really good room!

Thanks!

The overall layout and the way it's been set out is really good although imo the middle looks a bit empty and the section on the right looks fairly plain.

Perhaps try turning the middle bit into more of a picnicy area (not sure how much space there'd be) or even just add a path, few benches and some more plants so it seems more like a garden. For the right hand bit if you want to stick with the pool kind of theme, try adding some more skyscraper windows and put parasols inbetween the deck chairs. I think it'd look better if you covered the floor too with some kind of patch (field grass perhaps or even tiki sands) because atm it looks more like that section of the room is indoors if ya get what I mean? :P

I do love the way you've set the room out though

I see what you mean about the section to the right looking a little plain. The idea behind the floor was to resemble some form of decking. I'll definitely try using some benches in the middle section to make it look a little more park-like. Thanks for your feedback. :D

[scott]

I like the room, I quite like the party lamps cause hardly anyone uses them but I like them! Like Roxy said I think turning the middle area into a picnic sort of area would be good with some benches and stuff cause it'll finish it off :)

[Pigperson]

It's nice but personally I hate those grass patches because they look so autumn-y and dull. Also the corner with the rock benches and the brick walls, I think it makes the area look like a run down gangster area lol.

Will

[myke]

I really like the middle and let bits but not too sure on the right hand side bit where the deckchairs are :( +REP though :)

[Ms.Aquamarine]

Oooh nice! Good Job! :)

[Andy-]

I liek the concept behind the room but as someone said it looks like a run down area.