First habbo alt. Fun house

[Zeptis]

I will post a different version later with furni in it and with slightly alted clothes on me. To see in full size please do as instructed by cliicking the tag the click the image once to zoom in and see the image ass intended
http://Habbox.com/assets/images/802/1302662447_First habbo alteration.png

[Zeptis]

This one is revised and has alted furni inside Such as the watermelon HC sofa, the brown potted palm tree, black handled fridge, and grey pura bookshelf also features neon dance floor custom style.

http://Habbox.com/assets/images/802/1302667359_Firsthabboalterationrevised.png

[smiffy70]

i think for your first one its good but overall it looks a little bit tacky

[Zeptis]

Now that i think about it the only part im proud of is the fridge and the hc sofas

[Samantha]

I know it's your first but seriously?

Anyone can just run a fill bucket over some squares and write 'Fun Hous' on. Fyi you spelt house wrong?

On the second one, the furniture aren't really alts? You have yet again just used the fill tool on them. You can't even call them recolours.

Look on youtube for videos on How to Recolour and How to do Alts then maybe they will not look tacky.
Also the colours used are really rubbish. Just saying.

[lRhyss]

I know it's your first but seriously?

Anyone can just run a fill bucket over some squares and write 'Fun Hous' on. Fyi you spelt house wrong?

On the second one, the furniture aren't really alts? You have yet again just used the fill tool on them. You can't even call them recolours.

Look on youtube for videos on How to Recolour and How to do Alts then maybe they will not look tacky.
Also the colours used are really rubbish. Just saying.

Sorry but, I agree Totally

[Zeptis]

hahaha i wasnt even sure if i was gonna post this it was worth a try

[orientalframe?]

I know it's your first but seriously?

Anyone can just run a fill bucket over some squares and write 'Fun Hous' on. Fyi you spelt house wrong?

On the second one, the furniture aren't really alts? You have yet again just used the fill tool on them. You can't even call them recolours.

Look on youtube for videos on How to Recolour and How to do Alts then maybe they will not look tacky.
Also the colours used are really rubbish. Just saying.

Again, agreed with this - hardly any effort looks like its been put into it, sorry.

[rnix]

No need for pure negativity ;/

Good try for first though :) You can only get better, have a look round this graphic forum and get ideas and how to improve. :) Good luck for your next one.

[myke]

I remember this is what my first Habbo alt was like! Simple but you should really crop the image before you post it!

[lizzieTBH.]

I'm not going to lie, I really don't like it. It looks like you just went a little crazy with the fill tool on paint which is probably what you actually did.
I think you should look more into recolouring single furni rather than a room and work on shading.

[Shufflix]

All you've done on the sofas is add a bit of red? Nice try for a first alt though.

[Samantha]

No need for pure negativity ;/

Good try for first though :) You can only get better, have a look round this graphic forum and get ideas and how to improve. :) Good luck for your next one.

It's constructive critism, I told him how to improve.

[Andy-]

I agree with what has been said it isn't really that great. Their are many areas you could improve on and I suggest learning how to do basic recolours on youtube like minibars and the club sofa properly.