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chipie60
17-08-2005, 05:54 PM
For Someone Special ;)

No two words could explain how I feel
So I guess this will have to do
Out of the blue, you liked me
You choose me, out of the crowd.

I felt invisible, unwanted, unneeded
We never talked before
It was hard, but now
Boy you've turned me upside down.

You surprised me, you weren’t like the others
You made me feel special
Took me out of the crowd, out of the girl
Into your heart, brimming with welcome.

Never thought about you before...
Well not this deeply...
Why the change takes me over
Takes me over completely.

I'll always be there for you
Deep down I know
It’s true, I care a lot
About you.

mcmurtrie
17-08-2005, 09:20 PM
Thats brill jen :D

Carlsta
17-08-2005, 09:21 PM
poetic jen <3 xD

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooer!!

april
17-08-2005, 09:23 PM
That's a really sweet poem <33.

Who's it about? ;)

chipie60
17-08-2005, 09:59 PM
Lmao He will know when he sees ;) Thankies Peeps <3

StripedTiger
17-08-2005, 10:52 PM
awwwwwwwwwww thats so sweet :)

we have some talent xD

chipie60
17-08-2005, 11:34 PM
Aw thanks xD

GaryBest
17-08-2005, 11:48 PM
For Someone Special ;)

No two words could explain how I feel
So I guess this will have to do
Out of the blue, you liked me
You choose me, out of the crowd.

I felt invisible, unwanted, unneeded
We never talked before
It was hard, but now
Boy you've turned me upside down.

You surprised me, you weren’t like the others
You made me feel special
Took me out of the crowd, out of the girl
Into your heart, brimming with welcome.

Never thought about you before...
Well not this deeply...
Why the change takes me over
Takes me over completely.

I'll always be there for you
Deep down I know
It’s true, I care a lot
About you.

I think we all know who was dat for, and spent ages finding it :) so sweet and loving, it makes my heart rate increase, romance increases and her thoughts are like mine, we both share our love that would never would be ended easily :) Poem next :P from me hehehe

Luv u Jen <3 :)

Tropica.
18-08-2005, 06:55 PM
Ooooh Jen You never told me about this, Ooo er! Now you'd better be nice to me, because i can tell Mum can't I jen ? ;)

Wayne
18-08-2005, 06:58 PM
Awww, that's cool ;) Well done. :rolleyes:

GaryBest
18-08-2005, 07:05 PM
Lol ell!! >:) another reply is gonna be coming and big xD

Tropica.
18-08-2005, 07:06 PM
Lol a no ;)

GaryBest
19-08-2005, 08:27 AM
xD wot did everyone think about ma poem

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