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Kasabian
04-06-2011, 01:43 AM
http://i.imgur.com/X68Ol.png

Got carried away after making Buzz earlier on.
Rate, c+c and what not :)

Zeptis
04-06-2011, 01:52 AM
Now that is cool, they look very nice, thumbs up +rep

Sloths
04-06-2011, 05:10 AM
Naww love them :D +rep

Zeptis
04-06-2011, 06:02 AM
Oh wait, i have an idea, try to make a Mr. Potato head habbo style

myke
04-06-2011, 06:07 AM
Tom these are awesome. I have nothing bad to say! Make bulleye ;l or potato head

ItzJordan!
04-06-2011, 06:20 AM
Once again Tom, I haven't seen a better artist than you since back in January '09, I was at HFFM then! Amazing work + I will +REP all you work from now one.

+REP

Eric
04-06-2011, 06:34 AM
Very cute ;D Make Rex Dinosaur ! :D

orientalframe?
04-06-2011, 06:47 AM
They're amazing, I love them! Very good work. :D

Jssy
04-06-2011, 07:06 AM
Those are really good :)

Jordan
04-06-2011, 08:07 AM
You need to make Mr and Mrs potato head. and those alien things on the keyrings???????? Again Tom, those are amazing, all the little details pays off as they look much alike!

dbgtz
04-06-2011, 08:56 AM
Jessie - I'm guessing with the hair you used a referrence where she is actually moving, therefore the pony tail should not be seen (it also kinda looks like it's coming out the hat). I also dislike how the yellow thing on her shoulders doesnt have a black outline where other things do (same comment for the buttons too). Oh, after looking back at a picture I realise that they're not on seperate layers, sorry about that but I also realise that the collar should have black outlines and go around the head more. The bluething also should go completely around and be a more denim blue.

Woody - The legs are improportionate to the body, if you look at a woody image the legs are longer, not the top half. In terms of the sleeves, the one on the right seems to be much shorter, probably not reaching his wrist whereas the one on the left touches the hand almost. Really the one on the left should be shorter if any of them are. Furthermore, the red lines are really straight and don't really follow how a body would be. I know it's meant to be toy like, but he's not flat. Also the jacket shouldn't be so tight to his body.

Buzz - The hands, they look like they bend. I know what you're trying to do but it just looks like they're bent and half of it doesn't look like it's meant to be part of the hand. Looking at a referrence, the hand part is around equal size to the bit before the hand. The fingers themselves look pretty weird to be honest aswell, but that may just be because of the weird hand shape. On the grey "elbow", I don't get why the bit facing the body has no black outline? Moving on, I do like the wings (although I'm not quite sure why the black lines crossover at the top). Final thing, I think there was some wrong proportioning here as the chest/torso area seems way too small, and the black bit linking the upperbody to the lower body seems way too big, but I guess thsi may be just to suit the habbo theme. Overall though he's the best of the three, with Woody probably being the worst.

Also one small thing with woody and Jessie, but the dark line under their eyes make them look tired.

Perhaps try making smaller isometric graphics as, to be honest, they're much more challenging and overall can be much nicer.

geo
04-06-2011, 10:24 AM
They're very good, Tom. Nice work :)

Chris
04-06-2011, 03:13 PM
Wooo, loving these. You should so do Rex and Ham too. :D

Tom
04-06-2011, 03:25 PM
These are really nice! +rep

Jurv
04-06-2011, 06:42 PM
Absoloutley amazing work T0m, please try and make mr.potato head! :P

David
06-06-2011, 02:54 PM
That's not a laser, it's a little light bulb that blinks xD
These are amazing, +rep.

MizzBex
06-06-2011, 02:56 PM
Well done! :) I love them! +rep

Pegle
06-06-2011, 04:56 PM
Amazing. +Rep

simon305
07-06-2011, 09:31 AM
Maybe try and make them isometric?

I like buzz however his face needs a little work, A+ Rep for him.

Jazz
10-06-2011, 03:46 PM
They are really good Tom. Well done! :D

Ms.Aquamarine
11-06-2011, 01:00 AM
You are really good Tom! :)

Nick
11-06-2011, 04:54 AM
omg like wowowow that is awesome.. Deffo love buzz

Zuth
11-06-2011, 11:11 AM
Really nice alts! Love them all! Be cool if you made all of the main characters from the movie and made a collection! :)

Recursion
11-06-2011, 11:40 AM
Amazing work, nice one! :)

Agreed with above, Mr and Mrs Potato head would make it 100% better. LOL

Shar
11-06-2011, 05:55 PM
You have amazing talent! They're so good :)

paddy140
12-06-2011, 07:16 PM
These are really really good :) :)

Gibs960
12-06-2011, 08:14 PM
This is gonna sound strange but these are the two smallest teeniest weeniest "problems", arms and wings seem too long in comparison to buzz, make Jessie the same size as woody and make REX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

e5
13-06-2011, 08:52 PM
Awesome!! ;) I do think buzz's rings are big ahha, but still amazing :P

Mr-Trainor
14-06-2011, 06:26 PM
They all look very good, although my favourite is Buzz. Well done, +rep :D!

Aaron
15-06-2011, 12:40 AM
Wow, that's amazing. +rep for you! :)

IAmAsianBoy
16-06-2011, 04:36 AM
That's awesome! You received a +rep :]

davecool656
19-06-2011, 05:00 PM
they look cool :) :)

Paige.
26-06-2011, 01:39 PM
woah they're awesome tom, +Rep :P

Warmness
30-06-2011, 09:21 AM
They are quite good! I love the detail but I would have made them isometric! More fun.

Nuxty
30-06-2011, 01:36 PM
Just seen these, they're really good! They're just so detailed and look real, so I'll give you a 10/10 for them! :D +Rep!

Aaron
30-06-2011, 01:55 PM
Whoops, didn't notice I already commented + rep'ed you.

Katiieee
30-06-2011, 03:22 PM
AMAZING!!!!!!!!! ;D

xxSweetnSpicyxx
02-07-2011, 08:28 PM
+rep +rep +rep +rep +rep

YOUR TOO GOOD AT GRAPHICS! :)

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