Fern Cotton - MY First CELEBRITY Pixel Art

[DeanLafferty]

Gimme' A Bit Of SLACK LOL! I'm Not Cut Out For Celebrity Pixel Art - But Oh' I Do Try... Here We Are... FERN COTTON! Aha! XD
http://i1187.photobucket.com/albums/z381/DeanLaffertyHabboGraphics/ferncotton.png

[Jurv]

It's not too bad, I just think you need to work of your shading a little more. I'm sure after a few practices of doing these sorts of alts you'll improve quite a bit. Keep up the good work! :)

[orientalframe?]

Its alright, but I think the arms look a bit strange and the lines are a tad too think in places. Also I think the facial expression is a bit off compared to in the picture. Finally I think the long strands of hair seem a bit crowded with black lines. Apart from that a nice piece, well done! :P

Oh and agreeing with Cameron there, your shading needs to be imporved a bit. :P

[Samantha]

Arggggh take into consideration what I said about the lines for the 3rd time lol!

I must say though, although it doesn't resemble her that well (no offence) but I prefer it to your other alts!

I think if you work on your shading and your line art you will be pretty good, you have the motivation and will to succeed, good luck!

[Accipiter]

She needs bigger nostrils

you ****** up big time LMAO you tilted her mouth but not her head. When in the photo her head and mouth is tilted. Kind makes the mouth look bad. Straighten it up.

Also the edges seem to have shading on both sides giving it a hugeeeee outline feel.

[Chris]

It's okay. The face shape and features don't look right at all though.

[ItzJordan!]

Its pretty good for a first celebrity attempt but ERM, apart from that its terribly misshaped. he mouth needs more work. ARM HANDS & EYES need work, the hair isnt perfect but its good, try straightening out things and comparing it to other that are a little more perfect.

[dbgtz]

Fearne*


Gimme' A Bit Of SLACK LOL! I'm Not Cut Out For Celebrity Pixel Art - But Oh' I Do Try... Here We Are... FERN COTTON! Aha! XD
http://i1187.photobucket.com/albums/z381/DeanLaffertyHabboGraphics/ferncotton.png

Right first things first, the black lines should only be one pixel thick, rarely does it become thicker and this is not one of those circumstances either.

The hair - Any bit inside the outside black outline should be the blonde colour, or the greeny yellow that you have made (yeah the colouring isnt great, but I understand how hard colours can be).

The clothes - all the colours just seem to be random, especially on the top, no real shading at all. On the skirt you didn't really capture the flowers (at least I think thats flowers on the original) very well and just repeated this ugly pink and gold. Also why does the skirt have a dark blue line around the edge next to the main black outline? On the shoulder bits, it is far too square on the habbo one.

The hand - More specifically, the fingers are far too short and the hand overall is too square.

The mouth and elbows - The mouth has some weird angle, you obviously didn't take the head tilt into considering and the elbows just seem really weird and flat. Infact just looking the whole arm seems really long.



She needs bigger nostrils

you ****** up big time LMAO you tilted her mouth but not her head. When in the photo her head and mouth is tilted. Kind makes the mouth look bad. Straighten it up.

Also the edges seem to have shading on both sides giving it a hugeeeee outline feel.

Oi I was gonna mention the nostrils :(

[DeanLafferty]

I Am Trying LOL! ......

[dbgtz]

I Am Trying LOL! ......

Yes and what everyone is doing is called helping and giving constructive criticism. You can't expect to get better if you don't listen.

[Accipiter]

Yes and what everyone is doing is called helping and giving constructive criticism. You can't expect to get better if you don't listen.


You're such a lecture tom LMAO

NO ONE SAID YOU WEREN'T TRYING KIDDO, IF YOU WEREN'T TRYING THIS THREAD WOULDN'T BE HERE.

ofc unless you ripped it, but we all know you didn't

[dbgtz]

You're such a lecture tom LMAO

NO ONE SAID YOU WEREN'T TRYING KIDDO, IF YOU WEREN'T TRYING THIS THREAD WOULDN'T BE HERE.

ofc unless you ripped it, but we all know you didn't

Well liam I am going to be a teacher in future so I need to learn to discpline people! LOL JK I just find it fun to be strong and harshish. Politics/game development ftw.

And yeah what Liam said (but mostly what I said).

[MizzBex]

I think it's pretty good for a first try - not sure about the face/mouth though!

[DeanLafferty]

Yes I Understand what it is, There's no need to explain like that, and I appreciate comments and feedback, either positive or negative.

[ChloeeBALDWIN]

Ok .. I actually think its ok for a first ever time doing celebritys +rep