[The Rock] My First Alt!

[David]

Tom [Kasabian] Wanted me to make a Habbo Alt (He called me a bum :'() So I did.

So My first attempt went bad, then I tried a different method and complete new look and resulted with this;

http://i.imgur.com/uTDOX.jpg Start ~ Finish http://i.imgur.com/luXdG.jpg


Criticism welcome, I don't mind :)

[Zeptis]

I'm not sure what we are supposed to compare this alt to, so I can't say i like it or dislike it, but one thing i can say is i don't like the tatto.

[David]

My reference was a video of his 2011 return, here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8ejiG5-BtA).
The tattoo is a scaled down version of the real thing:P

Thanks for the feedback :)

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Started work on a front angle, hopefully much better outcome than this one :P

[skooledmepls]

It's okay... The trousers look a bit like the skirt, the thing in his hand, I don't even know what it is and his tattoo looks like a grey blob on his arm.

I'm not trying to be harsh, but maybe it's something to improve on, I don't know how myself as I'm not a graphics artist, but I'm sure you will get very far one day, keep at it! :)

[Samantha]

Maybe try something a little simpler rather than an alt at first.

Get used to colours and shades and basic pixel art.

For example try doing some recolours then work your way up! :)

[David]

It's okay... The trousers look a bit like the skirt, the thing in his hand, I don't even know what it is and his tattoo looks like a grey blob on his arm.

I'm not trying to be harsh, but maybe it's something to improve on, I don't know how myself as I'm not a graphics artist, but I'm sure you will get very far one day, keep at it! :)


Maybe try something a little simpler rather than an alt at first.

Get used to colours and shades and basic pixel art.

For example try doing some recolours then work your way up! :)


Thanks for the feedback ;)

[orientalframe?]

I think the tattoo looks just like a grey blob, and perhaps whatever that is in his hand should be changed. Apart from that i think its perfectly fine, well done! :)

[David]

I think the tattoo looks just like a grey blob, and perhaps whatever that is in his hand should be changed. Apart from that i think its perfectly fine, well done! :)

it's supposed to be a microphone in his hand, but it's a fail :P
Thanks for the feedback.

[Nick]

What is he eating o.O??? It looks like the pants are a skirt to me ?

[David]

What is he eating o.O??? It looks like the pants are a skirt to me ?

That's a microphone, supposed to be anyway :L
& I only recoloured and removed the belt thingy :( not my fault :P

[A]

I dont get what this things ment to be near its mouth. Anyhow love the tattoo, its quite nice well done xxxx

[Mark]

It's a good start, it needs to be a lot more clear. Apart from that, it's really good, well done.

[vz]

I like it, but the microphone looks a bit bleary, would look better if the mic was solid.

[dbgtz]

Did you just take images, cut them out and then shrink them down? All that does is make it look blurry and not suit the habbo style at all. It's alright for a first, but I think you put too much on your plate for a first.

[Forest,]

Its a little bit blurred but I like it. It might be worth it to try and make muscles for it. The tattoo isnt very distinct but I still like it. Oh and maybe a line between the legs cause it kinda looks like a skirt [only when you REALLY look]. Still; love it.

[Pegle]

I like it, but the microphone looks a bit blurry, would look better if the mic was solid.

2.

But the tattoo looks really nice.