I'm on one [REMIX]

[Lamz]

Hey, Idk if many of you know but I love music & i like to write verse's for songs and remix them...

The first one I did was a remix of Khalia - Rodeo (Feat. Lady Leshurr)

They are both underground arist's from the UK & I sent them the link VIA twitter & they both said they like the lyrics but obviously the recording can be better & that I should keep it up. So I did.

I have done a remix of DJ Khalid - I'm On One (Feat. Drake, Rick Ross & Lil' Wayne) I took Rick Ross out because I am not a huge fan of his & I thought that was the best place to add my verse.

Can you post some feedback and let me know what's good and what's bad for the next time I do something. Thanks :)

Links:
Rodeo (http://soundcloud.com/simplelamar/khalia-rodeo-feat-simplelamar)
I'm On One (http://btbm.me/1gr)
My Twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/SimpleLamar)
YouTube Channel (http://www.youtube.com/user/SimpleLamar?feature=mhee)
Khalia Twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/khaliasmith)
Lady Leshurr Twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/LadyLeshurr)
DJ Khaled Twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/TheRealDJKhaled)
Drake twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/drakkardnoir)
Lil' Wayne Twitter (https://twitter.com/#!/LilTunechi)

I know my youtube channel is bare atm... I will find time to upload videos, but atm can you post feedback please. :)

[Jazz]

Wow Lamar, I loved what you did with both songs. Your an amazing rapper, the only thing I could possibly pick up on is that when you were rapping on 'I'm on one' im not sure if its just my speakers, but you could do with being a little clearer?

Overall I love them Lamar! :3

[Lamz]

Wow Lamar, I loved what you did with both songs. Your an amazing rapper, the only thing I could possibly pick up on is that when you were rapping on 'I'm on one' im not sure if its just my speakers, but you could do with being a little clearer?

Overall I love them Lamar! :3

my mic is being a ... but i'm gonna re~do it today, thanks woodwood :)

[Lamz]

Improved Audio & Video :P

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ILYsy_wMGsE

[Laurrenbbz]

I LOVE IT!! <3