Quick verse I did [Rap/Hiphop]

[GoldSolid]

Hey guys I was wondering if you could check this out if you're a fan of rap or hiphop music, especially UK rap/hiphop, all feedback appreciated, thanks guys :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a5jDuHDNEBQ

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[GoldSolid]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a5jDuHDNEBQ

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[Lamz]

from what I've heard it sounds good but your adlibs echo over parts & then it loses the flow for like .5 of a second... If they were turnt down it'd be better :)

[GoldSolid]

Thanks for the feedback much appreciated :)