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Brightened
21-08-2005, 08:54 PM
I was listening to the song 'All By Myself' by Celine Dion and then i decided that i would write a Poem about love hurting people because it does sometimes. Sometimes love doesn't hurt anyone.

You told me that you loved me
why did you leave me to cry in the cold?
You swore this time was different
why does that line seem so old
You told me I was the only one
who could make you feel that way
You told me that you cared about me
so why didnt you stay
All the nights you laid with me
alone in the dark in my bed
Now I finally realize
you were just messing with my head
Love is such a powerful word
a word people often misuse
Something they take for granted
something they beat and abuse
My wounds run deep inside me
there's blood all over the place
I think I’ve really lost it this time
i'm ashamed to show my face

AngJum
21-08-2005, 08:58 PM
Great poem.. n yer I can relate to it O_-

+Rep

BlueTails
22-08-2005, 12:54 AM
Very Niceee

:BlueTails
22-08-2005, 01:08 AM
Yes
Veryyyy

charmed..
22-08-2005, 01:11 AM
that is a gr8 poem :p

:BlueTails
22-08-2005, 01:24 AM
There is Someone In This World For Us All, All We Gotto Do Is Find The Person

xsaucy-stephx
22-08-2005, 01:39 PM
I really like this poem, its so true. It actually makes you think about love in a different way, many people imagine love as all pink hearts, and sweet romance. But its not always that way, love hurts...

I agree with :BlueTails there IS someone in the world for us all.

Great poem Brightened + Rep

Steph
xx

BlueTails
22-08-2005, 02:44 PM
Why Thank You

Owen
23-08-2005, 06:11 PM
Good poem.

kasi
23-08-2005, 07:37 PM
That made me think.
I can relate to that.
Wow.
My new favourite poem.
+rep for sure.

Mr.Kylee
23-08-2005, 09:16 PM
Woha that's good! I really love it ;') you gota write more.



you were just messing with my head

^^
that's so true, people always do that ''/

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