Ekelektra
03-11-2011, 04:57 AM
http://www.habbo.com/articles/2707-t...-story-winners (http://www.habbo.com/articles/2707-the-habboween-horror-story-winners)
This is how the story ends...
For our Habboween Horror Story we needed your help with writing a chilling and disturbing ending to a tale that will freeze the blood and boil the brain.. (http://www.habbo.com/articles/2688-the-habboween-horror-story) We got so many entries... and after going through them all, we're scared to go to bed tonight.
The winner of the competition is JoeyBonzo (http://www.habbo.com/home/46833749/id), congrats on having the scariest end! As promised, he'll get a tombstone, a Habboween badge, and 5 points for his team, The Dungeon Crawlers.
We chose these runners up: Voltaire616 (http://www.habbo.com/home/24013358/id) of The Serpents of Doom, Gushy (http://www.habbo.com/home/43255249/id) of the Dawn Fighters, Wulnut (http://www.habbo.com/home/31234463/id) of The Dawn Fighters,dysco (http://www.habbo.com/home/31593548/id) of The Dawn Fighters, and !!!KEHRANG!!! (http://www.habbo.com/home/30821516/id) of The Serpents of Doom.
Their stories will render us sleepless for nights to come... The runners up will receive a Habboween badge and 2 points for their team, and you can also read their stories below.
So now, without further delay, here are six alternate endings that will irk your spine and chill your bones...
PART ONE OF THE STORY ››
(http://www.habbo.com/articles/2688-the-habboween-horror-story)
WINNER: Nightmare Ending...
Scott shivered from the sound of ChronoZomfg's deep, yet gentle, voice. The being named ChronoZomfg slowly appeared from the shadows of the corner. He was very tall, Scott thought he might be about 7 or 8 feet... but Scott then noticed the ground below him. Nothing. No legs, no feet, nothing. ChronoZomfg was floating in mid-air. His skin was a pale red, cracked and bleeding. He had four arms, but the two of them that had grown from the middle of his torso had no hands on the ends, just lumps of bloody skin.
"What do you want? Where is Charlene?" asked Scott in a brave yet terrified voice.
"Charlene is with me, Scott." said ChronoZomfg.
ChronoZomfg waved his hand and Charlene floated out from the wall, almost like a ghost. She seemed lifeless, but Scott saw small movement from her chest so he knew she was breathing.
"Please! Give her back and let us leave this cursed place!" demanded Scott.
"That cannot happen, Scott." Replied ChronoZomfg.
"Why the hell not?"
"My minions are hungry, Scott. And they demand human flesh."
Small, bone-chilling voices followed. "Yesssssss....human fleshhhhh....” The voices echoed all over the room. They were so quite, but still seemed to pierce Scott's ears.
And just like that, Charlene opened her eyes which were now glowing red, and made a wicked smile full of horrible, sharp, rotten teeth. She fell to the floor and ran towards Scott, hands out towards him. She grabbed Scott and began to feast...
ChronoZomfg smiled, and backed away into the darkness of the corner, leaving only a pile of blood in the corner of the room, and a horrible story about room 206 that Habbo's will tell forever.
by JoeyBonzo (http://www.habbo.com/home/46833749/id)
RUNNER UP: Nightmare Ending...
Chains drew from each of the room's corners, binding Scott in their metallic grasp. From the shadows he saw a dark form spew forth, an indiscernible figure sprung from darkness. To his amazement, the figure looked up at him and he instantly recognized who it was. "Charlene...?!" Scott yelled. He watched as the woman he once knew twisted and contorted into a horrible monster, a beast with seven heads, ten horns scaling their way back on each one's top.
"Heheheh... Such a young boy out on his own... Not ready to die... Not ready to feel pain or suffering, exposure to the horrors this world has to offer..." ChronoZomfg whispered, yet none of the mouths on his heads moved. "My six back heads spew forth the true hatreds in this world, and the seventh sings the song of Tartaurus."
At this point, Scott had soiled himself in fright, writhing in the chains trying to escape. "There is no escape from your fate, Scott..." Chrono teased. He began opening his mouths one by one, breathing shadows over Scott. The boy was enveloped in an irreversible darkness.
"Wake up Scott!" Charlene cried. She had tried everything to wake him, but he seemed to be caught in an endless nightmare, laying in his hotel room bed, screaming and writhing in pain... As he fell through the darkness of his own mind, Scott rotted away to bones, and as he did, his real body, too, withered away into nothing. Charlene could do nothing but weep, and she vowed revenge on whoever had done this. Claw marks scraped across the room's wall... They read... "ChronoZomfg".
by Voltaire616 (http://www.habbo.com/home/24013358/id)
RUNNER UP: Bloody Ending...
Scott saw a dark figure slowly drifting towards him, his eyes grew wide with fear and horror. The mans face was horribly disfigured, gaping wounds and teeth run amuck. Then he spoke in a low harsh voice...
"I have been waiting so long for this day to come...Scott." Scott shot up and ran to the farthest side of the room. Then the man spoke again " That young woman you came with, yes I made sure she was properly taken care of, one might say she's 6 ft under."
His laugh was that of terror and pain. Scotts mind started to race. The man tossed a bag in Scotts direction. Hesitantly he lurched forward and snatched up the bag and scuttle back into the corner.
The bag contained 3 items: a photograph, a birth certificate and a locket. Then Scott spoke: "Who...Who are you? What do you want with me?"
The mans voice boomed with delight and sorrow: "My name is ChronoZomfg, please look at the items in the bag. It may be confusing but you will understand." Scott slowly started trying to decipher what it all meant. In the picture were two young boys, one of them was Scott, the other a boy with a mask on his face. The birth certificate read Brandon Scott Habbowith. Then he opened the locket, a photo of Scotts mother and father. Scott started to sweat and his body became ridged with fear. His world started to spin and he choked out the only word he could think of "...Br- bro - brother." A smile creeped upon ChronoZomfg's face. He took Scotts hand and disappeared into the underworld.
No one ever saw the two again and Habbo Hotel was free of the deadly curse that it had been for so many centuries.
by Gushy (http://www.habbo.com/home/43255249/id)
RUNNER UP: Bloody Ending...
Then the door opened wide, creaking slightly, which sent shivers up Scott’s spine. He saw the outline of a hooded figure, with eyes gleaming from the corridor lamps. Scott then saw blood around the figure’s feet, he watched carefully as each scarlet-red drop hit the floor. Scott felt himself swallow hard, and found it difficult to look away.
‘Where did you... come from?’ Scott asked, stuttering through his words. The figure shuffled their feet.
‘A land where only I, ChronoZomfg, can exist...’ The voice still echoed, but got lower with each word. Scott shook his head in frustration.
‘The blood... why is there blood dripping from your cloak?’ The figure turned away for a second, almost thinking desperately of a decent alibi. But it only shook its head, and didn’t look back up.
‘Where’s Charlene, my... girlfriend?’ Scott hissed at the figure. Scott blinked frantically, trying to stop tears escaping his eyes. His lip fidgeted, his hands shook. He could feel his own heartbeat in his ears.
‘You mean...’ At that second the figure uncovered its long, slender arms and reached inside of its cloak, pulling out a female, her mouth open, blood escaping her nearly-blue lips. Her body was pressed against the figure, she struggled to breathe. The sound she made was like a kettle boiling. Her body was covered in charcoal-coloured muck. Her clothes were ripped and ragged.
‘My Charlene...’ Whispered Scott, walking up to the figure and touching Charlene’s arm. Then Scott felt his legs droop, his body filled with agonizing pain, he tried to scream, but instead he started to cough up blood and worm-like creatures. He fell to the floor, feeling his head lock into a position he couldn’t break free of. A voice then said...
‘Welcome to Hell, Scott. Here, have your Charlene back...’
by Wulnut (http://www.habbo.com/home/31234463/id)
RUNNER UP: Mysterious Ending...
“Chrono who?!” exclaimed Scott as he turned to witness a tall white ghostly figure. His face was hooded, completely covered; yet, this frightened Scott even more. “I am ChronoZomfg” repeated the figure, in a cold, brisk tone. It moved closer to Scott, who by this time, had backed away to the furthest corner of the room, shocked.
“Who? Where – Where’s Charlene? Did you do something to her?!” ranted Scott, unaware that ChronoZomfg was slowly lifting its hood.
“I’m here Scott” whispered a familiar voice – it was Charlene. Scott was sure it was her, however, she was nowhere to be seen, her voice a mere whisper, seemed to be coming from ChronoZomfg.
As ChronoZomfg lifted its hood, Scott gasped. Not because he was frightened, but because he recognized the face – well, recognized parts of it. Charlene’s eyes struck out as the most prominent feature, her big brown eyes, once so full of life, now looked as dull and as lifeless as the Black Roses which withered in the hotel lobby.
“Charlene?” whispered Scott, “Is that you? It can’t be…”
“Help me Scott! Help me! Let me out, please!” screamed ChronoZomfg, but this time, instead of his harsh tone, Charlene’s voice rung in Scott’s ears. She was trapped. Scott could tell by one look at her eyes.
“Charlene?” questioned Scott as he slowly moved closer, “Don’t worry, I’m here with you, always”, he was suddenly pulled back. Green Bean Vines strangled his arms and grabbed at him. He was reluctantly being pulled back, thrown against the wall, and before he knew it, he was being uncontrollably absorbed, and at once had merged into ChronoZomfg, who commented; “Yes. With you, always”
The door opened and the concierge entered, holding a Head On A Plate; “A wonderful gift, for you and – oh!”
by dysco (http://www.habbo.com/home/31593548/id)
RUNNER UP: Mysterious Ending...
The young lovers shudder at the raspy voice. They twist and turn, desperately trying to locate where it's coming from.
"Who are you?!" Scott asked. "What do you want?!"
A menacing and somewhat evil laugh echoed in the room. Scott reached out for the lamp on the bed stand. "I'm warning you, if you don't show yourself now, I'm gonna use this on you!" he yelled out. A dark mysterious form stepped out from the darkest part of the room. Sure enough it was a man. He wore a black robe with the hood covering his face. Scott didn't take any chances. He ran up to their guest and bashed the lamp onto his head.
"Ow!" cried the stranger painfully, falling onto the ground. "That freaking hurts!!"
Scott stepped back. "I'm gonna ask again, who are you?"
The man stood up and opened up his hood. "Chill out! Geez... I'm Kitano. A Habbo staff. I've been assigned to give you two your free complimentary gifts." Scott dropped the weapon.
"Why are you dressed up like that? And what's up with the ChronoZomfg thing?" the young man asked, slightly apologetic.
"Because it's Habboween! All of us staff members are dressed like this during this time of year. Listen, I gotta go deliver more gifts. Here's yours." Kitano mumbled and puts the nicely wrapped presents on the floor. "You're welcome." He puts on his hood again.
"Wait. So this ChronoZomfg... what's that?" Charlene asked.
Kitano looked back at them. A creepy smile pulled on his face. "Lets just say... it exists... and IT is out there alright." he backed up into the dark corner of the room and vanished from sight. "Sleep tight. Don't let ChronoZomfg bite." his voice echoed in the darkness, leaving the lovers alone in the pitch black room.
by !!!KEHRANG!!! (http://www.habbo.com/home/30821516/id)
Congratulations to the winner, your stories are way better than mine :)
This is how the story ends...
For our Habboween Horror Story we needed your help with writing a chilling and disturbing ending to a tale that will freeze the blood and boil the brain.. (http://www.habbo.com/articles/2688-the-habboween-horror-story) We got so many entries... and after going through them all, we're scared to go to bed tonight.
The winner of the competition is JoeyBonzo (http://www.habbo.com/home/46833749/id), congrats on having the scariest end! As promised, he'll get a tombstone, a Habboween badge, and 5 points for his team, The Dungeon Crawlers.
We chose these runners up: Voltaire616 (http://www.habbo.com/home/24013358/id) of The Serpents of Doom, Gushy (http://www.habbo.com/home/43255249/id) of the Dawn Fighters, Wulnut (http://www.habbo.com/home/31234463/id) of The Dawn Fighters,dysco (http://www.habbo.com/home/31593548/id) of The Dawn Fighters, and !!!KEHRANG!!! (http://www.habbo.com/home/30821516/id) of The Serpents of Doom.
Their stories will render us sleepless for nights to come... The runners up will receive a Habboween badge and 2 points for their team, and you can also read their stories below.
So now, without further delay, here are six alternate endings that will irk your spine and chill your bones...
PART ONE OF THE STORY ››
(http://www.habbo.com/articles/2688-the-habboween-horror-story)
WINNER: Nightmare Ending...
Scott shivered from the sound of ChronoZomfg's deep, yet gentle, voice. The being named ChronoZomfg slowly appeared from the shadows of the corner. He was very tall, Scott thought he might be about 7 or 8 feet... but Scott then noticed the ground below him. Nothing. No legs, no feet, nothing. ChronoZomfg was floating in mid-air. His skin was a pale red, cracked and bleeding. He had four arms, but the two of them that had grown from the middle of his torso had no hands on the ends, just lumps of bloody skin.
"What do you want? Where is Charlene?" asked Scott in a brave yet terrified voice.
"Charlene is with me, Scott." said ChronoZomfg.
ChronoZomfg waved his hand and Charlene floated out from the wall, almost like a ghost. She seemed lifeless, but Scott saw small movement from her chest so he knew she was breathing.
"Please! Give her back and let us leave this cursed place!" demanded Scott.
"That cannot happen, Scott." Replied ChronoZomfg.
"Why the hell not?"
"My minions are hungry, Scott. And they demand human flesh."
Small, bone-chilling voices followed. "Yesssssss....human fleshhhhh....” The voices echoed all over the room. They were so quite, but still seemed to pierce Scott's ears.
And just like that, Charlene opened her eyes which were now glowing red, and made a wicked smile full of horrible, sharp, rotten teeth. She fell to the floor and ran towards Scott, hands out towards him. She grabbed Scott and began to feast...
ChronoZomfg smiled, and backed away into the darkness of the corner, leaving only a pile of blood in the corner of the room, and a horrible story about room 206 that Habbo's will tell forever.
by JoeyBonzo (http://www.habbo.com/home/46833749/id)
RUNNER UP: Nightmare Ending...
Chains drew from each of the room's corners, binding Scott in their metallic grasp. From the shadows he saw a dark form spew forth, an indiscernible figure sprung from darkness. To his amazement, the figure looked up at him and he instantly recognized who it was. "Charlene...?!" Scott yelled. He watched as the woman he once knew twisted and contorted into a horrible monster, a beast with seven heads, ten horns scaling their way back on each one's top.
"Heheheh... Such a young boy out on his own... Not ready to die... Not ready to feel pain or suffering, exposure to the horrors this world has to offer..." ChronoZomfg whispered, yet none of the mouths on his heads moved. "My six back heads spew forth the true hatreds in this world, and the seventh sings the song of Tartaurus."
At this point, Scott had soiled himself in fright, writhing in the chains trying to escape. "There is no escape from your fate, Scott..." Chrono teased. He began opening his mouths one by one, breathing shadows over Scott. The boy was enveloped in an irreversible darkness.
"Wake up Scott!" Charlene cried. She had tried everything to wake him, but he seemed to be caught in an endless nightmare, laying in his hotel room bed, screaming and writhing in pain... As he fell through the darkness of his own mind, Scott rotted away to bones, and as he did, his real body, too, withered away into nothing. Charlene could do nothing but weep, and she vowed revenge on whoever had done this. Claw marks scraped across the room's wall... They read... "ChronoZomfg".
by Voltaire616 (http://www.habbo.com/home/24013358/id)
RUNNER UP: Bloody Ending...
Scott saw a dark figure slowly drifting towards him, his eyes grew wide with fear and horror. The mans face was horribly disfigured, gaping wounds and teeth run amuck. Then he spoke in a low harsh voice...
"I have been waiting so long for this day to come...Scott." Scott shot up and ran to the farthest side of the room. Then the man spoke again " That young woman you came with, yes I made sure she was properly taken care of, one might say she's 6 ft under."
His laugh was that of terror and pain. Scotts mind started to race. The man tossed a bag in Scotts direction. Hesitantly he lurched forward and snatched up the bag and scuttle back into the corner.
The bag contained 3 items: a photograph, a birth certificate and a locket. Then Scott spoke: "Who...Who are you? What do you want with me?"
The mans voice boomed with delight and sorrow: "My name is ChronoZomfg, please look at the items in the bag. It may be confusing but you will understand." Scott slowly started trying to decipher what it all meant. In the picture were two young boys, one of them was Scott, the other a boy with a mask on his face. The birth certificate read Brandon Scott Habbowith. Then he opened the locket, a photo of Scotts mother and father. Scott started to sweat and his body became ridged with fear. His world started to spin and he choked out the only word he could think of "...Br- bro - brother." A smile creeped upon ChronoZomfg's face. He took Scotts hand and disappeared into the underworld.
No one ever saw the two again and Habbo Hotel was free of the deadly curse that it had been for so many centuries.
by Gushy (http://www.habbo.com/home/43255249/id)
RUNNER UP: Bloody Ending...
Then the door opened wide, creaking slightly, which sent shivers up Scott’s spine. He saw the outline of a hooded figure, with eyes gleaming from the corridor lamps. Scott then saw blood around the figure’s feet, he watched carefully as each scarlet-red drop hit the floor. Scott felt himself swallow hard, and found it difficult to look away.
‘Where did you... come from?’ Scott asked, stuttering through his words. The figure shuffled their feet.
‘A land where only I, ChronoZomfg, can exist...’ The voice still echoed, but got lower with each word. Scott shook his head in frustration.
‘The blood... why is there blood dripping from your cloak?’ The figure turned away for a second, almost thinking desperately of a decent alibi. But it only shook its head, and didn’t look back up.
‘Where’s Charlene, my... girlfriend?’ Scott hissed at the figure. Scott blinked frantically, trying to stop tears escaping his eyes. His lip fidgeted, his hands shook. He could feel his own heartbeat in his ears.
‘You mean...’ At that second the figure uncovered its long, slender arms and reached inside of its cloak, pulling out a female, her mouth open, blood escaping her nearly-blue lips. Her body was pressed against the figure, she struggled to breathe. The sound she made was like a kettle boiling. Her body was covered in charcoal-coloured muck. Her clothes were ripped and ragged.
‘My Charlene...’ Whispered Scott, walking up to the figure and touching Charlene’s arm. Then Scott felt his legs droop, his body filled with agonizing pain, he tried to scream, but instead he started to cough up blood and worm-like creatures. He fell to the floor, feeling his head lock into a position he couldn’t break free of. A voice then said...
‘Welcome to Hell, Scott. Here, have your Charlene back...’
by Wulnut (http://www.habbo.com/home/31234463/id)
RUNNER UP: Mysterious Ending...
“Chrono who?!” exclaimed Scott as he turned to witness a tall white ghostly figure. His face was hooded, completely covered; yet, this frightened Scott even more. “I am ChronoZomfg” repeated the figure, in a cold, brisk tone. It moved closer to Scott, who by this time, had backed away to the furthest corner of the room, shocked.
“Who? Where – Where’s Charlene? Did you do something to her?!” ranted Scott, unaware that ChronoZomfg was slowly lifting its hood.
“I’m here Scott” whispered a familiar voice – it was Charlene. Scott was sure it was her, however, she was nowhere to be seen, her voice a mere whisper, seemed to be coming from ChronoZomfg.
As ChronoZomfg lifted its hood, Scott gasped. Not because he was frightened, but because he recognized the face – well, recognized parts of it. Charlene’s eyes struck out as the most prominent feature, her big brown eyes, once so full of life, now looked as dull and as lifeless as the Black Roses which withered in the hotel lobby.
“Charlene?” whispered Scott, “Is that you? It can’t be…”
“Help me Scott! Help me! Let me out, please!” screamed ChronoZomfg, but this time, instead of his harsh tone, Charlene’s voice rung in Scott’s ears. She was trapped. Scott could tell by one look at her eyes.
“Charlene?” questioned Scott as he slowly moved closer, “Don’t worry, I’m here with you, always”, he was suddenly pulled back. Green Bean Vines strangled his arms and grabbed at him. He was reluctantly being pulled back, thrown against the wall, and before he knew it, he was being uncontrollably absorbed, and at once had merged into ChronoZomfg, who commented; “Yes. With you, always”
The door opened and the concierge entered, holding a Head On A Plate; “A wonderful gift, for you and – oh!”
by dysco (http://www.habbo.com/home/31593548/id)
RUNNER UP: Mysterious Ending...
The young lovers shudder at the raspy voice. They twist and turn, desperately trying to locate where it's coming from.
"Who are you?!" Scott asked. "What do you want?!"
A menacing and somewhat evil laugh echoed in the room. Scott reached out for the lamp on the bed stand. "I'm warning you, if you don't show yourself now, I'm gonna use this on you!" he yelled out. A dark mysterious form stepped out from the darkest part of the room. Sure enough it was a man. He wore a black robe with the hood covering his face. Scott didn't take any chances. He ran up to their guest and bashed the lamp onto his head.
"Ow!" cried the stranger painfully, falling onto the ground. "That freaking hurts!!"
Scott stepped back. "I'm gonna ask again, who are you?"
The man stood up and opened up his hood. "Chill out! Geez... I'm Kitano. A Habbo staff. I've been assigned to give you two your free complimentary gifts." Scott dropped the weapon.
"Why are you dressed up like that? And what's up with the ChronoZomfg thing?" the young man asked, slightly apologetic.
"Because it's Habboween! All of us staff members are dressed like this during this time of year. Listen, I gotta go deliver more gifts. Here's yours." Kitano mumbled and puts the nicely wrapped presents on the floor. "You're welcome." He puts on his hood again.
"Wait. So this ChronoZomfg... what's that?" Charlene asked.
Kitano looked back at them. A creepy smile pulled on his face. "Lets just say... it exists... and IT is out there alright." he backed up into the dark corner of the room and vanished from sight. "Sleep tight. Don't let ChronoZomfg bite." his voice echoed in the darkness, leaving the lovers alone in the pitch black room.
by !!!KEHRANG!!! (http://www.habbo.com/home/30821516/id)
Congratulations to the winner, your stories are way better than mine :)