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StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 08:38 PM
http://i.imgur.com/78D96.png

tylermunjkt
20-11-2011, 08:39 PM
Looks really good for a first alt. Could work on the heart on the shirt though.

StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 08:41 PM
Thankyou, what free programs that are easy to use would yourecommendas im using paint o-o,, and what would you suggest to do to the heart? :}

tylermunjkt
20-11-2011, 08:43 PM
Not sure on free programmes... Perhaps GIMP?

FOr the heart maybe have a different colour? idk.

StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 08:44 PM
ok thanks ill post the updated pictures when im done :}

geo
20-11-2011, 08:47 PM
For a first try, it's pretty good. The hair looks a bit bad imo and I'd work on the t-shirt (make the heart a little better).

StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 08:53 PM
how can i make the heart better hm? :}

dbgtz
20-11-2011, 08:54 PM
The heart on the skin doesn't look right, it doesn't actually look like it is on there, and the wrist band doesn't look like it actually goes around (you need to curve the lines). Also you should not have replaced all the lines in the hair black, it should be dark red (except the outlines). However, for a first this is pretty decent, and I like the fact it isn't just a basic recolour.

Oh also, nothing wrong with paint for graphics like this, just saying.

StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 08:54 PM
http://i.imgur.com/54Kvb.pngWhat else? and is there any advice on modifying the hair cloths and making accesories? Thankyou {:

Zeptis
20-11-2011, 09:09 PM
These are just recolors but are good none the less, Nice

StuddedPants,
20-11-2011, 09:16 PM
Thankyou, do you know any easy for beginners alterations i can do to this like accessories in hair etc? {:

Gina
21-11-2011, 12:33 AM
Awh I really like these, as many others have said about the heart, it doesnt look right on the skin though. However its pretty good for your first alt :O Maybe insted of recolouring try change the hair like making it shorter or longer, or do something like that or try recolouring like some furni off habbo? :D

Eric
21-11-2011, 01:07 AM
They look pretty good but yeah the heart is weird :S Maybe one heart is enough :P

Onxyia
21-11-2011, 03:53 AM
Thankyou, what free programs that are easy to use would yourecommendas im using paint o-o,, and what would you suggest to do to the heart? :} Try Paint.net, im starting to use it :D

StuddedPants,
21-11-2011, 07:24 AM
Thank you guys! you're alot of help i will post the updated Pictures when im done {:

StuddedPants,
21-11-2011, 07:40 AM
http://i.imgur.com/Lq7MH.pngthankyou for you're help keep itcomming im not thrilled by the shoes but idont know what else i can do to them or to her, please give me some tips on doing shoes etc, {:

Furbies
21-11-2011, 08:10 AM
Nice. 7/10

Samantha
21-11-2011, 08:20 AM
http://i.imgur.com/Lq7MH.pngthankyou for you're help keep itcomming im not thrilled by the shoes but idont know what else i can do to them or to her, please give me some tips on doing shoes etc, {:

You need to work on your shading on the boots, the black doesn't look right as it's on each side when there should be a side for a light source (amazing words of dbgtz). If the 'shading' on the boots are meant to be a pattern you need to make them look more like a pattern and not just shading. If they are shading then they should be a darker purple.

The wristband still doesn't look like it goes around the hand too. The top of the t-shirt thing needs to be more round as one side looks really sharp, I know it's like that on the original but still :P!

Rainbow
21-11-2011, 09:07 AM
I like this although the hearts look too flat on her :P

FiftyCal
21-11-2011, 09:10 AM
Not too shabby my friend :)

StuddedPants,
21-11-2011, 04:13 PM
Thanks guys {: im going to be updating to you're requests and trying my bests but please still post with the bad sides as it is helping me alot ! and is there any help on how to change the hair or to top to make it look more original thankyou {:

StuddedPants,
21-11-2011, 04:30 PM
http://i.imgur.com/BWkmm.png
As you can see i have edited it a little bit more i nd more help on the boots, they just dont look right and perhaps on the hair, or stuff to go in the hair perhaps? {: thanks

twinart
03-12-2011, 07:26 AM
Nice try. I love the bracelet tho.

GirlNextDoor15
03-12-2011, 08:19 AM
i prefer the 2nd alteration. well done and keep up the good work. :)

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