View Full Version : [Alteration] My Ninja ( Feedback is Appreciated xoxo ) [Noob Edition]
Onxyia
21-11-2011, 11:56 AM
http://oi44.tinypic.com/15p0tuh.jpg
Red = Before
White = After
Hope you like it :3
I think it looks good. Maybe remove it'll look better if you remove that 'J' 'V' and the red dot on that white thing that you're wearing. :)
:odey:
21-11-2011, 12:20 PM
I actually really like that, haha :)
I think it's a really nice attempt imo!
The shading is really nice on the face mask thing, and the orange sash is really nice too!
I know it's not part of the alteration, but I think you should get rid of the arrow!
I think it brings down the overall quality a bit with it there! haha :(
Andii
21-11-2011, 01:17 PM
i love the mask thing its really cool :) :) did you cut her chest bit off??? :O :O lol also can you draw like half a sword on her back to make it look really really cool :) :)
LOVE IT TBH WOOP WOOP
Onxyia
21-11-2011, 01:57 PM
can do :D
I think the mask looks pretty good. I'm not overly keen on the hair nor the top, but it's a very good attempt. Keep trying, then you'll improve more and more! :)
Kaytti
25-11-2011, 08:54 PM
The pattern on the top looks odd. Also the strap would curve slightly because of the curves on the body. Also the scarf/mask is shaded wrong, the lighter colour should be top left rather than middle; it shouldn't start light and centrally get darker. Apart from that, the recolouring of the hair and other stuff is good. :P
twinart
03-12-2011, 07:06 AM
This is nice!
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