Xmas Greetings Card

[twinart]

Hi guys,

Habbo just opened a new competition called 'Holiday Greetings' where you need to create a holiday greetings card. I've sent my entry and I hope I can get the badge. Also, leave some comments and rate it. If you don't mind, post your entries here too but make sure you've sent it already!



Inspires:
Habbo Birthday Greetings Card '08

(http://www.habbox.com/images/calvin/archive/images/backgrounds/groups/8th_birthday_group_928x1360.gif)My entry:

http://i.imm.io/coMw.png

[Eric]

Looks really good. Not sure with the darker line on the left side though :P

[twinart]

@Yong.[/@];7350106]Looks really good. Not sure with the darker line on the left side though :P

Thanks for notifying me. Now I gotta edit & resend it.

[twinart]

My entry [RESENT/EDITED]:

http://i.imm.io/cp7E.png

Here you go, the edited & resent card.

[GirlNextDoor15]

aww. looks very nice and you can add some snowflakes too if ya like. :)

[twinart]

aww. looks very nice and you can add some snowflakes too if ya like. :)
Oh nice idea. I would do that. But I've sent it. Thanks btw.

[Samantha]

One thing I think is the side with the hotel on is bigger than the other side isn't it?

[:odey:]

I'm not too keen on the text,

It looks too big for that font :(

And the stroke looks too big :(

But the card as a whole works really well, nice work :)

[geo]

I think you should stick to the same font for the text. I do like the card itself though! :)

[TheCasualSpy]

The left side looks a bit oo big other than that i like it

[j0rd]

I like it I guess, you shouldn't really post it though, someone could claim it as their own!

[twinart]

I like it I guess, you shouldn't really post it though, someone could claim it as their own!

If they did, might the staff won't choose theirs because I sent it first.

---------- Post added 04-12-2011 at 07:19 AM ----------

Thanks for all of your feedbacks, guys.
Most comments I received is "The hotel side (left) is bigger". Actually I made 530/2 but fails, nvm.
I'll improve my GFX works in the future!

[Jurv]

It's quite a simple alteration, nothing too complicated but it does look alright. There's a few things that I would change though, first of all the fonts really don't look right. The font in the centre of the ribbons doesn't fit in with the theme at all and it seems a bit too big and pixelated. The second font at the bottom of the card isn't too bad. I wouldn't have used a white outline like that though, it doesn't fit in with the background image of the card. Another thing which I would change would be the christmas lights at the top of the page, I think that they're too close to the outline of the card. I would bring them down a little so one of them weren't touching the edge.

It's a nice attempt, good luck with the competition. :)

[Nick]

Im not to keen on the big stroked text + the text down the bottom with the white stroke.

[Rainbow]

It looks really nice although one side of the card looks bigger than the other side and they is a darker line on the left side! :D